I love this story!!!! So sweet!!!!! The perfect amount of drama & love!!!
April 27th, 2012 at 11:01pm
I'll be honest here, when I was reading the beginning, I seriously started to question if there was going to be any love making or form of romance, because it was half way down the page already. Did love it from the very beginning till the end. The explicit scene wasn't smutty but it wasn't downright boring either, it was the perfect balance between non-smutty and just a normal, passionate, embrace-love-making between two lovers.
Yup. That's it... I think...
I love your writing style, it's easy to read and flows well together. I don't recall spotting any mistakes, either there wasn't any or I was too into the story to even care to spot them. I love how at the ending she acknowledges the fact that there will be plenty more fights along the way.
It was a great read. I loved it a lot. <3 Amazing job =)
