Heartbreak & Lies - Comments

Must...continue....for...Disa...*groan*...Sex and romance...*groan*....This feels like giving birth....T.T...For....Disa.........*Slaps self* Keep your eyes open, freak. *Slaps self again*

Nah. I exaggerate. ^^

I must say, i've loved Jonathon (Cody) the most ever since the very begining. You killing him off made me bang my three-eyed weasel pet against the wall and pet my porcupine on the eyeball.
I must say, i liked the three-girl sleepover. It was cute. Plus, you're good at making Dante sound psycho. I hate Dante. Sorry. I know you like him. But i cant help it!!! Its an uncontrollable emotion! T0T
I think that Dante's poor wife should come up again in the story. Like, she should have a part to play. And frankly, i think she should have a psychological problem. (Given that her husband is the devil himself. o.o)
I do think that Emma shouldnt have been so evil towards her not-so-biological-brother Cody. Cuz it seems so ungrateful and mean of her. And i think Emma is a cute, ultra-nice, delicate, forgiving and adorable person, just like you. ;D. Thus, i think, given that Cody has been such a good guy all this time and raised her ever since she was a baby, she shouldnt hate him or totally forget about him. Just cuz he went a bit wacko towards the end doesnt mean hes a bad mafia boss that should be gunned....;_;
Duude. WHYDDDD YOUUUU KILL HIMM OFFF>...TT.TT
Srry.
I know, i know. Not my business, not my story, i should be quiet and not be so annoying but stiiill.
I like Coddyy!! ;o;
(Can there be this magic stone thing or awesome antidote that can bring story-dead people back to life? Please? Pretty please? With a garlic on top? ;_;)
Ah well.
Its good, overall. The romance is killing me like sulpheric acid, but i think all my vital signs are ok.. o.o..

Obviously the core audience for this story is teenage girls, am I correct? It's a good story, just not meant for adult readers. ;) Maybe with a rewrite this could attract many more readers. I noticed that there are some similarities between you and Emma. I hope you have stopped running in your socks at home. ;)

I SHALL COMMENT NOW :D!!! and again..IM LOVING THIS STORY :D

hehehhehehe conversations! i love heaps of conversation in stories, it helps to relate more to the characters...well...i think so anyway xD

:D i went on ur page to reply to ur comment on my profile and saw you had put up another story, the prologue is really good :) can't wait til it gets more into the story :)