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  • meg's red lips.

    meg's red lips. (100)

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    Fantastic! I really liked the way this was written. I don't really follow BTR but this was written in a way so it wasn't like I needed to know about the band to get it. Very nicey done! Thanks for entering my contest!
    February 23rd, 2011 at 01:04am
  • pezzie

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    This is so adorable and flawlessly written. Oh my gosh, I love this. It’s enough to put a smile on anybody’s face, no pun intended. I love how you described each and every smile. Each one was unique and described something sweet and beautiful. And I loved how you (in the story) was able to see all of them and I love the one where it was in the morning and he had stubble and you were the only person who ever saw it. That was so cute.

    The title is what attracted me and the layout just drew me in even more. I loved this! It was written amazingly and it was cute. Great job!
    February 13th, 2011 at 08:56pm
  • zayn malik;

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    I love Logan, so thats a plus! And it was very well written(:
    February 13th, 2011 at 07:05am
  • jcov

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    Oh, this one is cute. I like the idea of it. It's very original and no one really outlined their stories this way. I love the description of his smiles. There's like a whole story behind each and every one of them
    February 13th, 2011 at 04:59am
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