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  • mcrway

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    This story was pretty much perfect. I was recommended to read this and I'm super happy I did. This is my newest otp - and I don't even listen to NeverShoutNever. :') I'll go read the sequel now ~
    August 19th, 2012 at 02:29am
  • hungrylittleskeleton

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    Hi, I'm aware that this story is finished with, but I just wanted to share a few issues I came across in the little bit I did read. I only read up to about chapter 23 or 24 before I had to stop because I extremely disliked how you went about the Adrian being trans. The word transvestite is very offensive and if his character was suppose to be an FTM, he would be gay and not a lesbian as you called him in the story. Also calling him "step brother/sister" and referring to him with female pronouns even though his character is male is also offensive towards trans people. I'm sure you were not trying to be offensive, but I just wanted to let you know that you were offensive.
    P.S.: I did enjoy the story, I just found it hard to read when I felt that it was offensive. I know it may be a lot of work to go through and make all these changes, but if you could, I (and probably some others that come across this) would appreciate it. Thanks~
    May 21st, 2012 at 08:16am
  • IzzySkrillex

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    awesome story
    July 16th, 2011 at 10:43am
  • BOOM!roasted.

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    It was wonderful (: Keep up the good work!
    <3
    June 3rd, 2011 at 03:38am
  • wingslax96

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    this story was really awesome lol. if you still want a co-writer i'd love to do it lol.
    May 31st, 2011 at 07:01pm
  • s t a y y o u n g .

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    I'm sad its over. :( but glad there's a sequal :)
    But loved it so much.
    If you still want a co-write, hit me up with a message. I've got time and I would love to help ya.
    May 30th, 2011 at 11:50pm
  • AndyChaotic;

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    I love this story and I'm very sad to see it go already when I just found it :(

    I'd love to co-write if you did a sequel :)
    May 30th, 2011 at 06:14am
  • s t a y y o u n g .

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    I love it soo much !
    If you want a co-writer, I'll be more than happy to co-write it with you (:
    May 30th, 2011 at 03:10am
  • BOOM!roasted.

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    So good (: Update soon, yeah?
    <3
    May 25th, 2011 at 04:33am
  • DontGet_It_InMyEye

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    First: I love Drive(: and Incubus in general:P
    Second: This story is gettin better and better. Keep going!
    May 23rd, 2011 at 10:30pm
  • tommo.

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    Noooo this story must never end >.<
    just kidding
    May 23rd, 2011 at 05:41am
  • s t a y y o u n g .

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    Aww he's gettin better
    May 23rd, 2011 at 04:53am
  • BOOM!roasted.

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    Nice chapter (: Update soon, yeah?
    <3
    May 23rd, 2011 at 03:37am
  • death2hipsters

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    cant wait for an update :D
    May 20th, 2011 at 03:33am
  • unicorndreams

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    Ohmygawd
    If you make a sequel
    I will seriously find you whereever you are
    And hug the life outta you :3
    Aww that's would be AWESOME!
    I love this story so much,I would
    Do anything for a update!
    :)
    May 17th, 2011 at 04:41am
  • s t a y y o u n g .

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    Awww poor baby.
    I hope he gets better soon so he can be back with Oli. (:
    I like Zach. Idk why but I just do
    May 17th, 2011 at 04:29am
  • BOOM!roasted.

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    Good chapter (: Update soon, yeah?
    <3
    May 15th, 2011 at 04:19pm
  • ktxdd33

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    I absolutely love the story... each chapter gets better & better! Keep up the good work! ^.^
    May 10th, 2011 at 04:19am
  • wingslax96

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    i hope he's okay...
    May 9th, 2011 at 05:19pm
  • s t a y y o u n g .

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    Awww Chris !
    I hope he's okay !
    May 9th, 2011 at 02:04pm
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