June 9th, 2011 at 11:34pm
wow.
that is just about all i can think of to say.
this story was unbelievably amazing.
the relation to the picture was superb, the quote was great in context, and the plot development blew my mind. i'm just completely amazed at this entire thing. the idea was definitely not what i'd expected, and i was confused for a short while, but once i picked up on everything, it really impressed me.
i can't think of much else to say about this because that is how much this is blowing my mind. it was utterly phenomenal.
This was really amazing- I couldn't seem to take my eyes off the screen, and kept cursing my Internet for being so slow to load the next chapter. It was definitely original and creative.
You did a fantastic job. :]