Blackbird - Comments

i really like this story :) i felt like I could really relate to Catherine, about the whole 'under the radar' thing. it was really good :DD

Just so you know, I started singing Blackbird the instant I saw the title in the Pimping thread. Anyways; this was beautiful. I must admit that sometimes, comparing a person to a bird can seem cliche but you managed to pull it off so beautifully. Your writing style and description is wonderful and everything flowed so nicely. I really don't have anything to suggest; this was, once again, beautiful. And now I'm going to listen to that song. (:

This was wonderful. You made such a lovely comparison bewteen two unlikely things. The descriptions were just plain beautiful, and I could honestly imagine the scene set out infront of me. I found this uplifting and feel-good as I could relate to Catherine.I really liked this!
Awesome <3

I loved it. I thought it was really nice how it was all description and the comparrision between a blackbird and a teenage girl was just perfect. I don't think there was anything that could be done to make it any better. It's perfect the way it is =]

Lovely short story. I love the comparison of a black bird healing its wings and flying away to a teen leaving her home and heading out into the unknown of the world. You painted such a clear picture, with so few words i might add, of the emotions that are running through out Catherine's head as she departs into her new life. It was just the prefect little uplifting oneshot.

You always create such awesome stories, this one is no different. I loved it.