August 16th, 2011 at 04:25am
First off, I'm really diggin' the layout for this story.
Everything just sort of... fits together, I say.
Second off, I really like the story so far. I love how graphic it is, unlike other vampire stories.
Everything can't be all Twinkle Twilight and thank god yours isn't.
Keep up the good work!
Good job. I'll put a comment on your page with a length to the winners so stay tuned.