Our Bloody Masterpiece - Comments

Creepy sounding story for the win x] I love the layout, it reminds me a bit of something like CSI or Dexter, and the picture fits really well, perfectly really, with the title.

Cigarettes are like a good woman. Once you're hooked, you're hooked. ~ Oh my god, I seriously love this line. It's so simple and to the point. And true of course ;D The first chapter was brilliant, it made me laugh in a couple places, the writing was really well done and seemed really interesting. I liked how you talked about how kids these days don't have respect for people any more, simply because it's so true and you wrote it really well.

The second chapter really tugged at my heart when she described her relationship with that asshole, I know how it feels :|
Drew wasn’t the giver; he was the taker, he took my soul and bound it to him with an invisible contract. ~ girrrrlll, this line is brilliant <3 So perfectly written, I adored it. I also loved Charlie's passion about art, it was brilliant and so realistic as well, like all of it.

I really love this story so far, and I'm definetly subscribing ;D

Damn!
WHy the eff you leave it there!?
I wanna know what happens after the kiss!

This is really good. ^_^ I just stumbled upon it without really knowing what to expect, but I like it a lot. The characters are interesting, the plot leaves me wanting more, all in all it's a very well-written story. Keep up the good work, both of you!

SWEET! I was wondering how they were going to get back on touch!
Short but deliciously teasing and promising...cant wait for the next one!
Keep it up!
Both of you!

Holy fuck! That was the sweetest hostage situation ever!!!
I love it! I love the reason behind it!
Spencer is kick ass!
He is second place on my list of fictional real men that I want to seduce now...
Kwame is first...
Yes, I have a list.
Don't judge me.
Cant wait to see what your girl comes up with!

Finally got around to chapter two! Sorry, me and my laptop are having a bit of a lover's spat. She is being a bitch and I refuses to apologize! I loved it though! I love your writing style!

BUAHAHAHAHAHAH
COMMENT VIRGINITY!
As for the fair lady from Scotland...I am sorry if this offends you in any way...I tend to cuss and proclaim inappropriate things when my man Eve gets his write on...he is just that good.
Licking my chops just thinking bout the next chapter!
I love Spencer already!