Got A Secret? - Comments

alien94 (100)

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So.... updates? Do they exist for this story?

November 3rd, 2013 at 07:09am

punkrockhockeymarvel (100)

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I'm not sure if you're still planning to update this story but I'm really enjoying it. Rachel is an awesome character by the way.
Excited to read what happens next! :)

October 21st, 2013 at 07:24am

StallionDucky (100)

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also...i like Rachel she seems like a cool character...and a suggestion, maybe you could add a picture of Rach in your character bio so us readers can have an idea of what she looks like

July 5th, 2012 at 06:34am

StallionDucky (100)

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i've never read an NHL story before...we dont have NHL over here lol so i havent really looked at them...you are a good writer.

July 5th, 2012 at 06:31am

chains-of-prometheus (100)

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Right off the bat, I noticed a few grammatical errors. You have team-mate, but I think it should be one word, but I'm not sure. Then it says, 'You have skills, you're a women.' Shouldn't it be woman?
Then, it says, '“You’re going to die alone, I see a dark lonely future ahead of you. Don’t be afraid of him just because he has a penis Rachel Keller".' The period should be before the quotations, and there should be a comma before Rachel Keller, I think. (Consult a professional about these.)
Other, than that, i loved the first chapter!

July 3rd, 2012 at 03:00pm

cowjess12 (100)

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You should continue this story. I love it!!!!

June 25th, 2012 at 11:14pm

I've got hope. (100)

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My subscription went inactive, and after I realized it I spent the whole day rereading and catching up!
I can't wait for your next update, girly!

December 29th, 2011 at 05:32am

Aly! (150)

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I love this story!!! Please update again soon!

November 25th, 2011 at 06:11am

Ultraviolet Light (100)

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Awww he's visiting!!
Love love lovedt the updates!!!

November 25th, 2011 at 04:55am

Leslie. (100)

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This is gon b interestiiiing..

November 25th, 2011 at 02:57am

RosiePosie08 (100)

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Poor Sidney.

November 25th, 2011 at 12:30am

RosiePosie08 (100)

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Love it.

November 24th, 2011 at 02:12am

Ultraviolet Light (100)

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loved the update!
hahaha loved the bit about Kaner!

November 24th, 2011 at 12:26am

Leslie. (100)

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Ahhhhhhhhh!

November 23rd, 2011 at 05:36am

weasleychick09 (100)

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:) I saw your comment! So here I am! Lovely as always! I skimmed the chapters to make sure I remembered everything! The All Star Game still makes me laugh! GO GO Gryffindor!
I am really excited to see her play for the Capitals...I mean yeah they are sort of Pittsburgh's rival but they are an excellent team...even without a Stanley Cup.
Well I hope you get a chance to update again soon! Hopefully some Sid game action will help! :)
Amanda
P.S. The game last night? Amazing right? I am so happy for him!

November 23rd, 2011 at 04:52am