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  • alien94

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    So.... updates? Do they exist for this story?
    November 3rd, 2013 at 07:09am
  • punkrockhockeymarvel

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    I'm not sure if you're still planning to update this story but I'm really enjoying it. Rachel is an awesome character by the way.
    Excited to read what happens next! :)
    October 21st, 2013 at 07:24am
  • StallionDucky

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    also...i like Rachel she seems like a cool character...and a suggestion, maybe you could add a picture of Rach in your character bio so us readers can have an idea of what she looks like
    July 5th, 2012 at 06:34am
  • StallionDucky

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    i've never read an NHL story before...we dont have NHL over here lol so i havent really looked at them...you are a good writer.
    July 5th, 2012 at 06:31am
  • chains-of-prometheus

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    Right off the bat, I noticed a few grammatical errors. You have team-mate, but I think it should be one word, but I'm not sure. Then it says, 'You have skills, you're a women.' Shouldn't it be woman?
    Then, it says, '“You’re going to die alone, I see a dark lonely future ahead of you. Don’t be afraid of him just because he has a penis Rachel Keller".' The period should be before the quotations, and there should be a comma before Rachel Keller, I think. (Consult a professional about these.)
    Other, than that, i loved the first chapter!
    July 3rd, 2012 at 03:00pm
  • cowjess12

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    You should continue this story. I love it!!!!
    June 25th, 2012 at 11:14pm
  • I've got hope.

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    My subscription went inactive, and after I realized it I spent the whole day rereading and catching up!
    I can't wait for your next update, girly!
    December 29th, 2011 at 05:32am
  • Aly!

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    I love this story!!! Please update again soon!
    November 25th, 2011 at 06:11am
  • Ultraviolet Light

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    Awww he's visiting!!
    Love love lovedt the updates!!!
    November 25th, 2011 at 04:55am
  • Leslie.

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    This is gon b interestiiiing..
    November 25th, 2011 at 02:57am
  • RosiePosie08

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    Poor Sidney.
    November 25th, 2011 at 12:30am
  • RosiePosie08

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    Love it.
    November 24th, 2011 at 02:12am
  • Ultraviolet Light

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    loved the update!
    hahaha loved the bit about Kaner!
    November 24th, 2011 at 12:26am
  • Leslie.

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    Ahhhhhhhhh!
    November 23rd, 2011 at 05:36am
  • weasleychick09

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    :) I saw your comment! So here I am! Lovely as always! I skimmed the chapters to make sure I remembered everything! The All Star Game still makes me laugh! GO GO Gryffindor!
    I am really excited to see her play for the Capitals...I mean yeah they are sort of Pittsburgh's rival but they are an excellent team...even without a Stanley Cup.
    Well I hope you get a chance to update again soon! Hopefully some Sid game action will help! :)
    Amanda
    P.S. The game last night? Amazing right? I am so happy for him!
    November 23rd, 2011 at 04:52am
  • Ultraviolet Light

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    love love loved the update!!
    Can not wait to see how the game goes for her!
    November 23rd, 2011 at 04:36am
  • RosiePosie08

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    That
    November 22nd, 2011 at 10:26pm
  • RosiePosie08

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    Great update. So happy ath you are back
    November 22nd, 2011 at 10:26pm
  • underthesun

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    Ive missed this story a lot amazing update!
    November 22nd, 2011 at 08:00am
  • Ultraviolet Light

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    So glad you updated!!
    November 22nd, 2011 at 05:16am
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