Goodbye, My Lover - Comments

i just hope he didnt die -.-

That was brillant, I'm hoping that Zacky wasn't a jerk, at least that's what I like to think

I loved it. It was very fresh and new.

And I loved how I read "Goodbye, my lover." right when James Blunt sang it. That was just epic. I loved the song it was based off, but I think I loved your drabble/mini-story a bit more.

And I love how I'm saying 'loved' so much -_____- Sorry, I have a limited vocabulary- I'm blonde, blame that ;)

Anyways, your writing was brilliant and I agree with losing control. I couldn't decide if he was a jerk or died. I'm leaning towards him needing to leave. Like something forced him to. Like a disease or a guilt thing. Not quite sure. Hopefully you decided to extend this drabble/short story into a full fledged story *crosses fingers*.

Anyways, I looooooooved it. Keep up the amazing work. I'm off to see what else you've written ;)

I adore your writing. <3

I can't decide if he was a jerk and just left or if he died or something like that. Either way, the drabble was really well written. I love the song that this was based off of, and listening to it while reading this made it super awesome.

He’s gone, and I’m left standing here looking out at a colorful world through monochrome eyes.
I really liked that line. It was almost like a breath of fresh air when I read it, ya know?

Anyways, very lovely. I loved every bit of it (: