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  • vices

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    I'm in love with this story and I hate Helena.
    Please update soon! c:
    January 20th, 2012 at 09:35am
  • Nanook

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    Yay, an update! :D Loved the new chapter! :)
    Aw... Helena is just an evil person, isn't she? The antagonist. I couldn't help but think that karma is a bitch when Rimona looked and saw Helena's name crossed out on the list. That's what you get for worrying someone else about it--- you get the harm thrown on yourself.
    And Stefan saved Rimona again. ♥ Aww... I really hope that he still likes her, though. I mean, even though Rimona didn't see her own name crossed off on the list... doesn't mean Stefan's feelings didn't change personally. I don't think they did, though, because he didn't have to save her... but he did. :')
    Great job with the update darling! Can't wait for the next update. :D
    And yay, my banner is nearly complete. I'm so excited to see it!!! :D I'm sure it's even more amazing than the other one. You're awesome, you know that? :D
    January 20th, 2012 at 06:56am
  • girl meets girl

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    -is about to throw potatoes and sticks, but pauses-
    and then...

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    I'm just happy you updated! (((:
    December 24th, 2011 at 03:24am
  • Nanook

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    Yay, an update! :D
    Loved the new chapter!
    Aw, poor Aaron. They're still torturing him after all the pain he's been through... :(
    Stefan is very cute. I mean, it was awful that he shot Aaron, but... he's still being very sweet to Rimona. :)
    And.... uh-oh. What's with the creepy smiles at the end? With Helena, and then Stefan's father? Is Helena planning something Rimona doesn't know about?
    She's just... up to no good anymore. I don't really like her.
    Great update, though. :) I'm glad you finally posted. I really hope that you'll be able to update this more from now on.
    Can't wait for the next update! :D
    December 19th, 2011 at 11:23pm
  • ximone

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    This story needs more recognition!!!
    It's bloody good!!!
    I love this!
    THE DRAMA IS SO GOOD!
    More please!
    August 29th, 2011 at 03:05am
  • Nanook

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    Yay, an update! Loved the new chapter! :)
    Aw, so Aaron got curious and went to see what was going on. In a way, it was sweet, because it shows that he cares about Rimona, but it's also foolish as well because he wouldn't move when a guy was being pointed directly at him.
    And Stefan shot him. :o ...what? Why? I mean, I understand his father was pressuring him, but still... :o
    Thrilling chapter. Like She and Him, it was kind of an 'edge of your seat' update.
    Can't wait for more! :D
    August 17th, 2011 at 06:31am
  • girl meets girl

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    The rough dirt against my bare feet feels disgusting, but I
    love Aaron’s warmth against my body.
    <3333 Oh my cow, Stefan shot
    Aaron... right?! :( This chapter had me on the edge of my seat! Good job!!
    August 13th, 2011 at 05:18pm
  • TheGoodLlama

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    This is so good. Thanks for updating :)
    August 12th, 2011 at 02:41am
  • Nanook

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    Loved the update! :)
    Aw, so Rimona's birthday is coming up! I wonder what they'll plan for her?
    And Stefan kissed her!! Too cute! <3
    Great job with the update! Can't wait for more! :D
    July 31st, 2011 at 02:59am
  • TheGoodLlama

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    Thanks for the update. I love this story <3
    July 23rd, 2011 at 04:13am
  • girl meets girl

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    I just read all eight chapters. This is amazing! A couple months
    ago I thought about writing a story like this but I never did get around
    to it. This, though, is way way way better than if I would've written
    it. I dunno but I don't trust Helena O.o I hope she doesn't betray Rimona.
    Mmmmm I love the theme song and this story. Like, a lot. <3 (:
    July 23rd, 2011 at 03:12am
  • MarshmallowCat!

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    *grabs tomatoes and tacos* pleeeeeeeeease dont wait so long before updating!!!!!
    July 20th, 2011 at 03:35pm
  • TheGoodLlama

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    Thank you for updating. I'm glad they're friends again :)
    July 16th, 2011 at 07:02pm
  • Nanook

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    Aw, I won't throw tomatoes and tacos at you. Maybe grapes, or peanuts... something smaller.
    lol. JUST kidding. Just kidding. I wouldn't do that, and you didn't take that long for the update anyway.
    Loved the update! Aw... so Rimona and Helena made up... I wonder how long that will last though? And aw... Stefan has been talking to Helena about how beautiful Rimona is! Too cute! :)
    Great update! Can't wait for more! :D
    July 16th, 2011 at 07:28am
  • sun city.

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    Love this story :)
    June 10th, 2011 at 06:25pm
  • ximone

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    Congrats!
    Love the chapter! This needs more credit! It's awsome!
    Can't believe it happen again!
    Yeah, Stefan needs to save Moni!!!!!
    MORE SOON!
    June 9th, 2011 at 08:51pm
  • Nanook

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    Loved the update!
    Aw... so Rimona finally confronted Helena and Stefan about what she saw. :o And neither seemed to happy to be confronted about it, especially Helena. But wait... did Stefan kiss her or Helena kiss him? Hm... although, I don't think it matters too much; they still kissed.
    Aw, and Stefan needs to save Rimona! He needs too! :(
    Overall, though, great update! Can't wait for more! :D
    June 4th, 2011 at 02:52am
  • heyjude;;;

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    This is amazing! I'm so excited I found this story. I love the style you write with. :)
    June 4th, 2011 at 12:22am
  • ximone

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    moreMOREmoreMOREmoreMOREmoreMOREmoreMORE
    May 9th, 2011 at 12:52am
  • Nanook

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    Loved the update! :D Aw, poor Rimona, though. How could Helena do that? :(
    Overall, great update, though! A bit sad, though. I wonder if Stefan saw her and Aaron, though? :o
    Can't wait for more! :D
    May 1st, 2011 at 09:29am