Look Alive, Sunshine - Comments

Comment swap! c:

First, I like your title. It semi-rhymes, it's cute. I like how something actually happened in the first chapter hah. I've seen many stories with filler intros and already, yours told us right away that they were moving. Also, I like the name Harley (: Anyways, it seems like a good story - good potential, anyways, to be a good story. So, good luck c:

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{ignore, same thing as Soleil}

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I really enjoyed this more then I thought I would. It's really good, keep it comming.
It's not all dramatic like some stories ^-^

(lol ignore this, it wont let me move on from comment swap unless I comment again... ^^ silly mibba)

Your Story is Really good! Just be careful when your describing things, you dont want your sentences to run away with you...Lol Easy to do I know!(Trust me! haha) But Yes, Please update soon!

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This was a great thing to read and I've enjoyed everything you have wrote up so far, the layour you've used is simple and pretty, hurry up and update woman!

Keep writing and good luck

Continue! Continue! Continue!
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Sounds interesting, go for a second chapter! lol
& um when you say New Work do you mean New York?

Awesome Keep writing hope she's a badass

Good, keep writing! :)

GLEEEE !!!!
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New Work ---> New York ?