Fields of Paper Flowers - Comments

Update?

Please Update!!! Please please PLEASE!

That was an awesome chapter! I think that Gabe should dump Mia if she gets on his nerves so much. I really hate that Gabe does't really do much for himself. But oh well, I just want him to end up happy (When he studies what he wants and gets rid of Mia to be with Sully cause it's obvious that the oh so beautiful boy is Sully.) Update soon!

Mia is really getting on my nerves. She's so clingy! And she's rude. The way she just sat in Gabe's lap at lunch and completely interrupted the conversation he was having, that was not a cool thing to do. Basically I'm just not impressed with her and think she needs to go. It sort of feels like Gabe is sleep walking. He's going through all the motions but there's no heart to what he does except when he was talking about history. Then there was his reaction to seeing Sully and it was like he woke up. I wonder what Sully's initial reaction to Gabe will be. Hope to find out soon! <3

Wow. Second chapter, intense. I love it! :) Really great chapter! It's really sad what happened to Dottie and I hope that Sully can pull out of his depression. Update soon! :)

Damn, I'm about ready to cry right along with them. I really like how the chapter started off by talking about how people change. It lead nicely into the telling of Dottie's murder. I really like Sully's mom. I'm sad to see the bubbly personality disappear so soon. I'm really disappointed in Sully's so called friends for abandoning at a time when he needs them most. Hopefully the change of moving will turn out to be for the better for both him and his family. Can't wait for more! <3

I really like it! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Hm, I like it so far. =]
Hope there's more soon! <3
*subscribes*

EXCELLENT! :P