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  • Lovecrush1

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    I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    July 27th, 2011 at 06:52am
  • franceschi.

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    Nawh!
    Nawwwhh!
    Nawwwwwwwwh!
    That was so cute ^.^
    I loved this. Just, the ending and the middle part where he started talking about Ollie during his wedding was adorable. The fact that he didn't go through with it made it even sweeter. I loved how you fitted the song in as well, it was subtle but still obvious at the same time. The addition of lyrics as seperators is one of my favourite things to do as well, so I appreciated that, haha.
    I loved the characters too. The way Ollie walked in at the start was perfect; it set his character off brilliantly :)
    I loved reading this, and the ending was so happy and lovely. Thank you for entering! :D ♥
    February 25th, 2011 at 05:44pm
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