Pregnant at 16. I Don't Think This Was in The Bible - Comments

  • bookreader89

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    I cried....I knew something was going to happen!!! I knew it! But it was an amazing story and I finished it in under 2 hours! OMG! When I read the cold lifeless part I started bawling my eyes out....but I was happy Haydn found the note....and when they met...total Kodak moment! Luv it!
    June 20th, 2012 at 05:34am
  • Tofindme

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    I would have cried but it would ruin my makeup
    March 18th, 2012 at 04:25pm
  • junebugjones

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    I LOVE IT...even if i read only read the first chaper!!!!!!
    March 12th, 2012 at 04:51am
  • junebugjones

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    I LOVE IT...even if i read only read the first chaper!!!!!!
    March 12th, 2012 at 04:51am
  • Tofindme

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    Your boyfriend sad that to you. awww! how sweet.
    nice update.
    August 7th, 2011 at 10:01pm
  • akanevampire19

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    I love the letter! =D
    August 4th, 2011 at 02:19pm
  • akanevampire19

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    Now Hayden left... Summer didn't deserve that. Update soon =)
    August 3rd, 2011 at 12:33am
  • K_atie.

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    :( I wanted the update so bad, then it was sad. Still the story is still amazing:)
    August 3rd, 2011 at 12:14am
  • Tofindme

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    Lol you should definitely wtrite a poem for us!
    Omg Hayden Jaks arse would have been grass in my book. I would have literally thrown out all o the pictures I had that had him in there and deleted his contact number on mah phone.
    August 2nd, 2011 at 06:00pm
  • Tofindme

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    Oh you had better update soon or Ill kick your arse all the way around the world and back.
    August 1st, 2011 at 05:49pm
  • K_atie.

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    Ah! I just read your story and then right when Hayden came into her room I was like yay I get to find out why he's mad. Except it isn't up yet:( Update soon please! I love this Story!
    August 1st, 2011 at 02:55pm
  • Baby.We're.Burning

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    love the new layout!!! Great chapter(: go hayden!
    June 14th, 2011 at 05:06am
  • Baby.We're.Burning

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    another great chapter!! please keep updating (:
    June 9th, 2011 at 03:39am
  • Tofindme

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    More
    June 8th, 2011 at 07:01pm
  • ZOFL!

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    Hi. New reader. Waiting for your next update.
    But i wanna comment on a few things about your writing:
    1. Proof-read what you've written because sometimes its confusing and annoying
    2. When someone agrees its not shakes head, yes. Its called nodded/nod/nodding.
    and yeah that's all i can think of
    May 20th, 2011 at 12:39pm
  • Baby.We're.Burning

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    awww cute chapter!! i love hayden <3
    May 19th, 2011 at 11:08pm
  • Tofindme

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    I LOVE the name Harmony Sunshine
    May 18th, 2011 at 02:11pm
  • Baby.We're.Burning

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    great story!! but I bet Autumn & Summer wont be friends again...haha thats my prediction(:
    May 11th, 2011 at 02:17am
  • Tofindme

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    Ohh what happens next
    May 10th, 2011 at 05:51am
  • BoyCrazzyEmo2

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    only one page of comments that will not doo!
    this story is amazing cant wait for moree :D
    May 9th, 2011 at 08:44pm