I Said I'd Never Leave You - Comments

this story mad me ball my eyes out.

This story was fantastic and deserves so many more comments than it received.

Chapter Twelve & Thirteen


Idek. I'm so happy right now.

Chapter Eleven
Aw geezuz. I'm creeped out but that was just so...good isn't even the word. Wow...

Chapter Ten-o
THE TEASING. AND THE TENSION. AND THE...BOYFRIENDS OKAY. BOYFRIENDS.

“I had unfinished business.” (oh lord what is wrong with me )

Chapter Nine

/composed

Hi Mitch. Guess what you two will be doing soon

How do you make the eating of brains (literal brains, lord) ...not gross. How.

I like this so much. I like you so much. Our babies -- they need to happen asap.

Idon'tevenknowwhatchapteranymorehi

-goes to jump off a bridge because I'll never write as beautifully as you-

OKAY
Chapter Eight
Pandora is a hot sexy man beast (idek, why did I read the secks first?? Why did you let me do that??!?) All the tension and the wanting to (not?) kill each other is just...ngf.

“We didn’t fuck.” George turned beet red.

OKAY. COHERENCE IN THE NEXT CHAPTER.

Chapter Five to Seven
(I was kind of on a roll)

I have nothing else to say other than this story makes me want to find you and keep you with me forever and ever. Sheesh. I really wasn't expecting the character development and the surprises (ahem, Pandora). Just wow.

Chapter Three
I loved that entire paragraph where Max describes the neighbourhood. It really gives you a chance to see into his mind -shrugs-

And the fic. This fic. Why do you always do this to me?

Chapter Four
Ahahah I love Haydon.

I really have so many feels for this story. I can't wrap my head around them. You. Gah.

Chapter Two
I love the word Oddities (just had to put that out there ) Must find a way to use it today

I love how Max is portrayed; wicked Grim Reaper type. This idea is so original I want to kill myself. I will never be as cool as you

“Miss you, Mitch,” he said as he fondly ran a hand over the top of the stone, a little smile on his face.
Damn I love this kid.

“History, the Bolshevik Revolution.” Now I'm thinking Animal Farm and I want Max to kill me. (Sorry)

>>runs to next chapter

Chapter One

She went splat like a watermelon. So bloody descriptive, aren't we? Shit. Ouch.

But what. I have no words. I have so many feels. What.

Max had murdered his best friend.

I can't even begin to tell you how much I appreciate your writing.

I'm going to read it now, but can I just say lol to this:

Warning: zombies/cannibalism, horror, sadism and boyxboy sex.



(I am so desensitized)

I don't really know how to word this exactly, because this story was so overwhelming. It just made me live with the characters. Well, maybe not right from the beginning, with all the emotionless killing, but the ending was absolutely breathtaking! I was almost literally feeling the same pain Max was, and I rejoiced when the ending wasn't as sad as I thought it would be when I read the description. Plus, I liked the twist you had planned for Pandora, telling his story as well; it made the reading experience even better.
At the end, I was crying, first from sadness and then from happiness. The ending was a good one. :) And the story was too.

The concept you had here was most certainly unique; I haven't stumbled upon any zombie stories quite like this! Sure, there have been a few with romance it them, but not anything like that whole death's advocate thing. It was interesting to say the least. And at first, it was kind of weird to read about Max making people kill themselves with so little care about it, but gradually I got hooked on the plot. Especially when Mitch got into the picture.

All in all, your story was mindblowingly amazing, and I had the pleasure of reading it. :) Thank you.

HI I JUST WANT YOU TO KNOW THAT I REALLY REALLY LOVED THIS STORY - IT'S ONE OF MY FAVOURITES LIKE EVER AND I'M REALLY SAD THAT IT'S OVER BUT I LOVED THE ENDING AND HOW EVERYTHING WORKED OUT (SORT OF) BETWEEN MAX AND MITCH AND IDK JUST A REALLY GREAT STORY :')

I saw the story description and immediately thought "DEATH NOTE!" But then I realized that maybe not everyone stays up late at night watching anime, so you probably don't know what I'm talking about. But I'm gonna read this anyway - it's got zombies and boy love.

Slightly a bit confusing on what exactly was going on with the flashbacks xD

Im... Terribly upset. :(
Make it better. Make him die so they can br yogether

Okay shit just got legitimately real! I will not kid, this is THE COOLEST chapter of this entire story because I'm SUCH a zombie addict. Your descriptions of the zombie people and their eyes and movements and personifications just filled me with light and happiness and cornflakes! WOW :) haha seriously intense, seriously zombierific.

Wow. That was an amazing chapter, I don't know why you're doubting it! Perfectly paced, and I'm DYING from the ending! *suspense, dun dun dun!!* :D

so glad you updated!