Valentine's Day Lovers - Comments

I really like your story. You're an amazing writer. When reading the part in the story that said 'I've been a bad boy Brian." it made me think of the lyrics to Falling In Reverse's song Good Girls, Bad Guys and I started singing the part that goes 'i've been a bad boy and it's plain to see, so why do good girls fall in love with me' Definitely made me laugh :) Anyways good job on the story. I look forward to reading more of your stuff :)

i officially loved it!!!!

Man Zack's dad did go psycho! but i'm glad everything turned out okay for Brian and Zack

this this was really good!
i loved it! I love Brian's dad!

Awwh cute story! :)

OMG! epic story, I love it. <3

that is so sexxxxxxxxxxy... I was eating an apple when I read the moment where Brian eats the apples where Zacky jerked on... dammmmmn I was like 'OH FUCK'

i'll never eat an apple the same way now ^^

loved!

omfg!
Zacky's dad done flipped his lid!
*subscribes*

Its really cool so far ha ha ha. Okay so I think that its good to have fun sometimes without making money i'm going to start reading now and comment again when i'm done :)