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  • The Brieness

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    I really like your story. You're an amazing writer. When reading the part in the story that said 'I've been a bad boy Brian." it made me think of the lyrics to Falling In Reverse's song Good Girls, Bad Guys and I started singing the part that goes 'i've been a bad boy and it's plain to see, so why do good girls fall in love with me' Definitely made me laugh :) Anyways good job on the story. I look forward to reading more of your stuff :)
    August 5th, 2012 at 10:06am
  • Durch-Den-Monsun-87

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    i officially loved it!!!!

    Man Zack's dad did go psycho! but i'm glad everything turned out okay for Brian and Zack
    August 5th, 2011 at 07:59pm
  • CarynPikachau

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    this this was really good!
    i loved it! I love Brian's dad!
    May 14th, 2011 at 09:29am
  • Lady Lazarus

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    Awwh cute story! :)
    March 7th, 2011 at 11:35am
  • eragorn122

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    OMG! epic story, I love it. <3
    March 4th, 2011 at 05:49am
  • Rapsby

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    that is so sexxxxxxxxxxy... I was eating an apple when I read the moment where Brian eats the apples where Zacky jerked on... dammmmmn I was like 'OH FUCK'

    i'll never eat an apple the same way now ^^
    March 4th, 2011 at 12:44am
  • bloodravyn

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    loved!
    March 3rd, 2011 at 10:28am
  • bloodravyn

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    omfg!
    Zacky's dad done flipped his lid!
    *subscribes*
    February 18th, 2011 at 01:47am
  • Fiddle.sticks

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    Its really cool so far ha ha ha. Okay so I think that its good to have fun sometimes without making money i'm going to start reading now and comment again when i'm done :)
    February 17th, 2011 at 05:12pm
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