March 22nd, 2011 at 12:47pm
Second Chances, Bad Habits - Comments
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Loved it!!!March 20th, 2011 at 08:55pm
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WOW!!!!! i`m in shock!! Her mom kicked her out! Happy that Ash took her in though.PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!March 19th, 2011 at 07:20pm
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Aww, Ash is a friggin Angel!!!! <3 So glad you updated :D
Would definately be interested in the Max Green story writing... I've been stuck on my own stories for agesMarch 19th, 2011 at 02:54pm -
Well her moms pissed!! excuse my French. haha,sorry had to use the French thing,but anyway LOVED this chapter although Andy confuses me........but i still loved it!! PLEASE PLEASE update soon!!!March 12th, 2011 at 06:24pm
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JUST FOUND THIS!!! <3 it, love Ashley, more soon??? <3
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I’ve got my suspicions about something in here, but I’m not going to say anything at the risk of looking stupid.March 10th, 2011 at 06:27pm
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...I'm waiting for the next update to make my head spin....lol jk, but seriously update soon please!! I'm dyin here!! LolMarch 10th, 2011 at 04:01am
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I love this story ^.^March 9th, 2011 at 08:28pm
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i love this story :) its so cuteeMarch 8th, 2011 at 04:26am
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CC makes me laugh while Andy confuses me........any who,loved this chapter!! Can`t wait to read the next chapter!!March 7th, 2011 at 11:24pm
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I loved how hyper and crazy CC was.Can`t wait to read the next chapter!!March 6th, 2011 at 07:14pm
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Loved it!! It was so cute!!!March 5th, 2011 at 08:22pm
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Oooh, I have a lot to catch up on.
Noticed quite a few typos, though some chapters don’t seem to have any (others have a fair few).
Blah, I remember trying to cover something up with foundation, was not an easy feat.
… She jumped to the conclusion that all he wanted was sex rather quickly, especially as what made her think it was just because he’s in a band; she must have a low opinion of the people behind the sort of music she listens to... Though this sentence ‘Call me prejudice, but from the stories I’ve heard of rock stars, they ain’t all that into spilling their emotions like this,’ does give a bit of an explanation.
Erm, chapter eight and ten don’t seem to quite follow on, might just me being blonde, but it seems that the last little bit of chapter eight doesn’t fit with the beginning of chapter ten, the rest follows though.
Haha, xChihirox, I see that you put to use some of the song obsessions you’ve had over the past few weeks.
Hmmmm, her doctor’s a little rubbish.
You get a cast when your ribs are broken? My dad never… I suppose it might depend on the type of break.
I like how Ashley enjoyed the feeling of power over the jocks.
Ha, just noticed the star necklace in the picture.
Hang on, a dress with a bodice type top over a cast?
Sorry for the uber long comment.March 4th, 2011 at 07:15pm -
I loved it!! Please PLEASE update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!March 3rd, 2011 at 02:25am
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Update soon!!!!February 25th, 2011 at 11:22pm
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More please its really good!!!!!!!!!!!!February 25th, 2011 at 10:44pm
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When you use the saying ‘be careful what you wish for, you might just get it,’ I’m not sure, but I think it should be in ‘’.
THAT (INSERT CHOICE WORD HERE)!, Hitting Delilah, I would very much like to beat him up… oh wait, he isn’t real… damn reality.
‘Do you like Penguins’ – haha
Really enjoying this, keep it up.February 25th, 2011 at 08:43pm -
I like it a lot! So keep on writing! :)February 23rd, 2011 at 09:18am
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I like how it’s from the point of view of both Delilah and Ashley, especially how you show the same event through different eyes.
Loved the end of the chapter.
Great work, you’re both good writers, keep it up.February 22nd, 2011 at 04:33pm
lol, Ash is friggin adorable, update soon??