M. Shadows' Lips of Deceit - Comments

. . . WHAT?!
AHHHH.
noooooooooooooooooooooooooo.
but it was still an amazing ending.
wasn't expecting it at all!!!!!!!!
but, damnnn.
amazing work.

And she ends one more amazing story in a very epic way. I don't think she took the easy way out, she was out of things to live for and didnt want to have to try new things to live for. She lived for in the end, death. Amazing story!

They both took the easy way out....
wow wasnt expecting that

what the fuck
dude
just
wow

ooh, drama time!

o_o woah...I mean...wow...That was really great! I wonder how Matt's going to deal with this. Dun dunnn dunnnnn

ahhhhhhh. noooo.
XD
the SUSPENCE.

awesome update!
I cant wait for him to talk to her!

finally an update
i love this story
cant wait till the next update

great story

o:
drama-rama.
i hope everything's gonna work out
*bites nails*

This is freaking brilliant!

omfg!
she could have just lied!

O.O *cries* damn you rockstars for being sooo good looking and amazing as hell. Poor poor poor Adam...poor Victoria...Gosh...how is Matt going to react??!

dude i think my heart just broke a little
i hope matt will be there for her somehow
seriously when her boyfriend asked if it was worth it i would have said no

Okay that was phenomenal!

oh dear!
i wonder what'll happen next!

awwe.
kinda sad, but i loved it like alwaysss!!
you're so amazing at writing and i hope i get to read ALOT more from you, babe.
ily <3

O_O omg...nooo! Poor Adam, and and and the wedding! gahh! Noooe...Need more!

damn stoped it when it was getting good LOL can't wait for more love this story