I think your writing is good. It's descriptive and clear and the timing of giving information is well done.
Only thing is, I thought it was a bit weird that the rapist was either waiting around, or just happened to be there when Cane finally came outside after days and days.
I think your writing is good. It's descriptive and clear and the timing of giving information is well done.
Only thing is, I thought it was a bit weird that the rapist was either waiting around, or just happened to be there when Cane finally came outside after days and days.