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Hey, awesome beggining. Just proofread your story. Nice!

I love the hush hush series and you are great. So update.

i hope you're happy, now my whole family (cousins, aunts, uncles, grandparents, extended and everything, the effing lot !!) think i'm the weirdest kid out (which is true, but still). why, you ask ?? well, i was sitting there, among all their pointless banter, ignoring their stories about their pitiful little lives...mentally banging my head against a wall, with nails poking out of it, when i thought, 'hey, i know what will make everything better: MIBBA !!' so, i went on, found your story...and burst out laughing...just after my sister told everyone she was pregnant. -,-'. can we say fml ?? i sorta just stammered that i got a funny text. i've never seen so many death glares in one backyard, directed at one person. so yes, i hope you're happy. and on that lovely note, i will stop my unwanted rambling and leave :D
p.s.: update soon !!

Finally, a Hush, Hush fan-fiction, and a very good one at that.
You capture the essence of the characters well and definately kept my attention through out.
I love Patch and hope to read more of him in your story.
Update soon--I can barely wait!

How did you Hush, hush is one of my favourite books. This sounds amazing! Please update. I'm glad there are more Patch fans out there.
Jen
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Wow, I stole the First comment!