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  • this.is.bliss.

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    Love this too. Gosh, you're amazing. And I love your raunchy writing style so incredibly much. I kind of wish Sam had been involved a little more (sue me, I'm bi) and that there had been an explanation to Taylor finding her black camisole on the floor of Trent's room, as it had seemed like it may have been foreshadowing to something big, but oh well, lol
    January 24th, 2012 at 03:45am
  • flynnster1

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    i would love to read about 40 days!!
    January 22nd, 2012 at 07:59am
  • itscomplicated.

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    omgosh i'm so excited now!!!!! :)
    January 7th, 2012 at 05:16am
  • does.it.matter

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    chapter 10 of The Devil's Pawn was incredible. There was so much suspense. i was on the edge of my seat wondering what trenton would do
    January 5th, 2012 at 01:47am
  • Mali

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    Amazing amazing story seriously holy fuck. You write amazingly. The only time in this whole story that I wasn't completely 100% happy with it was during Trenton's dirty talk haha but only because it sounded a TINY bit like a porno.... But other than that, seriously, one if the best stories I've ever read on this website. And trust me, I've read a lot. Also, tell me when 40 Days starts up I promise I'll leave a sweeett comment after the first to get you going (: Much love! - Saskia
    January 4th, 2012 at 06:38am
  • alexisxx13

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    Let me know :D
    January 4th, 2012 at 03:57am
  • shygirl1993

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    Let me no when u start the story :-)
    January 4th, 2012 at 02:52am
  • poisongirl24

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    :D I wanna know when you get the new story started!
    January 4th, 2012 at 02:24am
  • holleycarb1296

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    i would love it so very much so if you would tell me when it starts. please and thank you.
    January 4th, 2012 at 02:20am
  • bffead22

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    Hey let me know when you start the new story, I loved TDP and I'm sure I'm going to love the new story! :)
    January 4th, 2012 at 12:49am
  • thunder rain

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    I'd love to read the story :)
    Please let me know when its up.
    January 3rd, 2012 at 11:47pm
  • AbbiSenger

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    Please message me when 40 Days starts. Thanks!
    January 3rd, 2012 at 09:15pm
  • xoxosamonekidxoxo

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    The new story sounds interesting. I wanna know when it starts. :)
    January 3rd, 2012 at 03:40pm
  • MforMaeri

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    I loved this story so mucH! But I'm quite interested in the new story as well :)
    January 3rd, 2012 at 12:29pm
  • SweetDreams.

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    am interested in your new story ;D
    January 3rd, 2012 at 11:54am
  • MrRandomGirl

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    When does the new story start?? I'm intrigued...
    January 3rd, 2012 at 10:59am
  • sxra

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    I'm in c: I loved tdp!
    January 3rd, 2012 at 08:58am
  • Grand R

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    What a sweet ending <3

    Do tell me when 40 Days is up, would you? ;D
    January 3rd, 2012 at 08:48am
  • hip-to-be-square

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    I would love to know when 40 days starts, i think ill love it as much as i loved this one!
    January 3rd, 2012 at 08:37am
  • trishha

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    I would love to know when the new story comes out!(:
    January 3rd, 2012 at 08:11am
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