Breathe Me - Comments

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I will make this one good. I l8ve this story so much, it had the perfect amount of drama and I cant tell you how awesome this story is

Fantastic story - fantastic writing, I am so excited for the sequel :)

DO THE SEQUEL!

Im going to miss Jordan! I was planning on marrying him but noo! He has to get traded to the Hurricanes! BULL CRAP!

That was great! Gonna go start reading the first chapter of the sequel.

I absoulutly loved this story, and I can not wait for the sequel!!!

Awesome story. Can't wait for the sequel!

loved this story and I will read sequel :)

I'm glad there is a sequel because with the confrontation between Sophia and her mom, things didn't seem to be as finished as Sophia would like them to be. The final chapter was cute and I enjoyed reading it. It affirmed their relationship and how much she depends on him. If I know which direction you are heading with the sequel, I really like the fact that you broke them up. This story seemed to be mainly driven by her terrible relationship with Ryan. I am predicting that the sequel will have to do with the relationship she has with her mother. I use the confrontation as my evidence.

I am really excited regardless if I am on the wring track, but I think with how serious things are getting with Kris, she won't be able to stop comparing her relationship with Kris to her mother and Ryan's. In her mind how terrible and destructive they became, or another route is how dependant her mother's love is even though it's not reciprocated. She could become fearful of her dependancy on Kris and think that she may end up as destructive as her mother. I don't really know because, hey, I'm not you but I'm really excited to see which way you take the sequel. Good luck with it!

i love your style of writing! i love the way you actually get into the characters heads, it's amazing! i can't wait for more of this story, one of my favourites!

I really enjoyed the chapter.

Awesome update. I loved her answer on why she loves Kris, so sweet made me want to cry too.

Ugh the perfect man in this story I am convinced. Unless James Neal comes along then i don't care if fictional Kris is perfect, he has no chance lol. And funny too he had a couple lines in here I chuckled at but had to shut up because everyone is sleeping. Her answer to why she loved him was so beautiful! I loved it! And Penguins fans are not weird! We just get excited easily lol. The Gretzky line was great. It was perfect. I really liked this chapter a lot. Great job :)

Will there be a sequel? I hope so, because I love this... It was amazing update :)

Wonderful! I can't wait for the last chapter!

That was just wonderful. I love his mom!

Adorable, loved it!

This is so great I can't wait to read more! It's fantastic = )

I was so happy when I saw that you updated :) Amazing job like always! :)

Adorable, as always. And as much as I love just Kris and Sopie together, I especially love when they're with the rest of the team. Omg Jordan was too much this chapter, his wakeup call was hilarious!

Keep it up girl :)