Let Me Be The One To Save You - Comments

  • StiltzScreamsRemedy

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    ... Alright, I'm barely on the second chapter, but I felt like I should comment and tell you that your story is already really good. The first chapter alone got me to tears, <3
    March 15th, 2012 at 10:19pm
  • kim wonshik.

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    Wow, I just finished reading and that was a great story.
    I absolutely loved it. It always kept me on the edge of my seat.(:
    I'll be sure to subscribe to the sequel!!
    July 8th, 2011 at 03:57am
  • paint.it.black.

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    that made me cry so much, i'm literally shaking! i can't believe that's the end)': it was amazing and it will be one of my favorite stories, forever and always
    <3
    xoxo
    June 13th, 2011 at 05:29am
  • Tayyyyyy

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    Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, no, :(, that ending broke my little heart.
    I can't decide who I feel more bad for, haha.
    On one hand, Gerard is a shit for not being more considerate of her feelings,
    But on the other, the same goes for her- she should have realized that it was his DREAM. It's hard not to get caught up in it.
    I don't know, I'm conflicted. So subscribing to the sequel.
    <3 Good jobbb, darlin'.
    June 13th, 2011 at 04:11am
  • tyckerommcr

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    loved it, even though it was kinda sad... i cant waiiit for the sequel! :)
    <3
    June 12th, 2011 at 02:51pm
  • stallion duck.

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    Ahhhhh shit.
    June 12th, 2011 at 07:30am
  • paint.it.black.

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    awww that was so saddd! i can't believe its almost over):
    June 11th, 2011 at 01:48am
  • Sailor Meranda

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    Much love. Soooo....sad. Tear drops are raining on my computer. : ( haha.
    Hm, I don't know if you like the music I like, but Hate Breed though there hard core there lyrics are very empowering, then theres the good ole Crue, Motely Crue, um....then I love Joan Jett, Lita Ford. Most of those are older groups, but there amazing. ;/
    June 10th, 2011 at 10:15pm
  • Tayyyyyy

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    I just started reading, but I do the same thing, talk out loud to those I've lost. Sometimes it's just better to feel like you can still actually talk to them and that maybe, one day, they will be there to respond.
    I love this so far. It hits home.
    <3
    June 10th, 2011 at 09:21pm
  • rivals are insane

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    love the update :D
    June 10th, 2011 at 05:10pm
  • Miss Tiffany Blews

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    Chapter 9 really got to me.
    1) http://elmoisemo6.deviantart.com/#/d3ibzaj
    2) http://elmoisemo6.deviantart.com/#/d3dmg9g
    These are 2 poems that I found and I think you should really read them.
    June 10th, 2011 at 03:32am
  • tyckerommcr

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    awww so cuuute :) i love how you update so often, cause then i usually have a lot to read :D
    <3
    June 8th, 2011 at 11:01pm
  • rivals are insane

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    love the update :D
    June 8th, 2011 at 06:56pm
  • XxSweetAngelxX

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    Way too amazing for words! And it isn't a bad thing that the story makes people cry, it shows how great of a writer you are and shall make people remember it, i always remember stories that make me cry more then any others.
    June 8th, 2011 at 05:14pm
  • paint.it.black.

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    SHE SAID YESSS! haha ray's so funny and answer to question: no the sex is just too weird i have no problem with gay people my best friend is gay i just cant read the sex
    June 8th, 2011 at 05:04pm
  • Venganza!

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    Aww Gerard is so cute!! I loved this last chapter hun! Hehe funny how the boys placed a bet though I am a little disappointed in Ray for not trusting their relationship! xD
    June 8th, 2011 at 04:48pm
  • paint.it.black.

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    awww gee went to the coffee shop just to see her! thats so sweet <3
    June 8th, 2011 at 02:00am
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    love the update :D
    June 7th, 2011 at 11:06pm
  • Leanimal

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    This is belated but I love your story and the recent 5ish updates have made my past two days and they kissed yeah!!!! My songs are:
    Bullets: Drowning Lessons, Our Lady of Sorrows
    Revenge: THank you for the Venom, Helena
    Black Parade: Cancer, Disenchanted
    Danger Days: S.I.N.G., Planateary GO!, Bullet Proof Heart
    June 7th, 2011 at 09:29pm
  • Venganza!

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    That was a great update darling. Ciara and Gerard are so perfect fro each other and I loved the kiss!!!

    To answer your MCR question let's see from Bullets: It's Vampires Will Never Hurt You, Early Sunsets and Demolition Lovers.
    Revenge:Helena, I'm Not Okay, Ghost of You and I Never Told You What I Do For A Living
    Black Parade: House of Wolves, Famous Last Words and Mama
    Danger Days: Vampire Money, Destroya and Save Yourself, I'll Hold Them Back.

    My favorite album though is Revenge because I started with that album and have followed them ever since! ^_^
    June 7th, 2011 at 09:21pm