Diary - Comments

From the first paragraph, I knew you'd read Diary by Chuck Palahniuk (which I'm currently reading for the fifth time!).

I absolutely love this. The way you wrote it was just incredible and man, I love all the anger she's built up against Gerard, the cunt. Amazing.

This was amazing. It was so sad and Gerard was such an idiot but not an idiot and why is she so obsessed with Frank?
Poor Vallerie.

Great story! Been reading the whole thing all morning. Wow. Fantastic.

^^^^Me too!^^^ One of my favorites!

Dang! I t was sooooooooo good! I'm kinda dissapointed that we don't find out if he ever came back or not, but then I think that it's better to imagine it myself. I picture him getting the papers and but reading the Diary first, and the whole time instead of feeling poorly about making her feel the way that she had he's smiling because he really did bring back her passion. So he finds that she's still the same person that he fell in love with just more grown up. Then he comes back home, and they're still in love. only now BOTH a little more grown up.

That's just the way i picture it though, and the end picture is beautiful!
This was an amazing story, I'm really glad that I found it!

:( I finished it...?
Well, it was amazing...
Now, I have to read something else.. :P
Loved it though!

XO
Jaz

I like that you ended when you did. Great writing. I'll certainly be looking into your other stories. Thanks for a great read.

that is messed up first gerard calls then she confesses her feeling but i guess it isn't fair since he doesn't feel the same but i hope for roxys sake he visits

It was with heavy heart that I opened this update. Literally. Didn't want it to end lol. But I love the way you've chosen to do it. You stuck to your guns and didn't just give in to the idea of Gerard - sort of like Valleri I guess. :)
Beautifully written and terribly emotional. I enjoyed it immensely.
Kinda sad the Gerard POV doesn't seem to work - I was hoping for his side of the story. But even if it doesn't happen, I really enjoyed this terribly depressing piece of work :P Thanks for writing and sharing :)

I loved this darling. It was so beautifully written and is one of my favorites ^_^

and better be a big ass finale i love that and post today

well that must've been a slap in his face to wake up and smell the achohol

I am honestly going to miss seeing the updates for this pop up in my inbox. It's been so emotional and honest throughout, like you're really writing from the heart. I have really enjoyed this story and thank you for writing it :) Reading the last installment will be bittersweet. x

Aw... stupid curiosity.. that cat just wanted to know!
Sorry... I loved it!

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Jaz

yay now you get to grace us with this storyand i love the sister relationship it makes me appriciate my twin love her to bits even though sometimes she can be a little shit

OH! and I really like the irony of the new baby being born on Mikey's birthday even though she doesn't much like him haha

I love that you've made her so mean :) I hope in the end that it really IS Gee reading *nods*

I love your whole entire writing style; I just found 2 of your stories a few nights ago and so far so good. As soon as this story is over, I'll probably go on into your earlier other stories xD

Update soon? <3

well if it is nearing the curtan call there had better be a big ass encore

no! It can't be over that soon!
Aw, baby is borned! :D
I'm starting to miss Gerard, lol.
I can't wait for more!

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Jaz

Ohh, i'll be sad when it ends :( will gerard ever come back? even if he is an arse :P x