You're The Only One That Can't See It - Comments

THIS IS SO CUTE. Can I just say that?

I love the characters and their interactions, especially the relationship with Drai and Andrea, though I felt it might have been a bit rushed, seeing as story's main theme seemed to be getting the two of them together. But that might be just me.

And I hope Chris and Camille get together, she looks so sad and confused in the movie theater chapter :(

I don't know what to think of Kenneth, but I do NOT like Heather >:( I don't care if she's "trying to make amends" I think she's evil and coniving!

I hope you update this soon<33333

Now why the hell would I give up on this story? ;D

Actually, you are sooo lucky because I've been cleaning out my subscriptions and a few days before the last time we talked I was thinking about unsubscribing because I thought you were gone for good ;_; But you're not! And thus, I am happy :D

I've missed Andrea (well... not really, since she and Drai have been popping in the story really frequently now xD) and everyone else :( I'm so glad you updated!!! And now I get to continue with my lovely, amusing comments:3

I hope you feel special, since I don't usually leave long comments. I JUST LOVE YOU THIS DAMN MUCH!

lololololol. But seriously. I'm waiting for some action! Like.... like.... I don't know. But this was cool, especially having studied Romeo and Juliet last school year. Super chill x)

Glad you're back:) I was super excited when I saw the comment on my profile<3

I kinda like Kenneth, in a sense. I guess. I don't know :/

*clears throat* Okies! First things first! I'm so sorry I haven't been able to comment on BOTH of your updates *cries* I've been so busy this past week and today was my first day since last sunday that I've been able to relax (slept in until noon, I'm wiped TT~TT). BUT I have been reading your updates from my phone so I was still able to read them in the midst of catastrophe! :3

Anyway! TO THE COMMENT OF STORY! :3

Even though chapter 11 was filler-ish, it was really cute <3333 :tehe: Hmmm.... Kenneth? Same Kenneth that was going out with Heather the Ho? Ermmm.... I'm curious to see what you do with him. Maybe Heather and him will cause some drama together, unknowingly, if you plan to expand a relationship with him and Andrea... like Kenneth goes after Andrea while Heather tries to get to Drai.... Hmmm..... or something like that XDDD

Awe DAMN Kenneth is her tudor!!!!!!!!!! *shot* yikes, poor Andray.

And before I go on with the comment, I created nicknames for all of the characters :3 SEE:

Andrea: Andray
Drai: Drai-ray
Christopher: Chris-y
Camille: Camilly (or Camilla)
Heather: Heather the Ho
Kenneth: Kenny

XD All but Heather's has a "y" in it... I thought they sounded pretty cute X3 :Tehe:

Anyway~! My only suggestion, would be that if you're going to start a line of texts, to state that Andrea is going to text. Like say.... "After the teacher stopped talking and I headed out the door, a light buzz sounded from my pocket, signalling a text had arrived." I don't know XD something like that because it took me a bit to figure out what was going on XD

So umm.... I hope this mega-comment made up for my lateness XDDD And to AndreaAz up there, I'm glad my comments are entertaining! :DD I try XDD (not really, I just write out anything that comes outta my brain while commenting XD)

OHHHHH by the way, I'm late updating my own story >.> By the time you get this comment, I swear I'll have updated it! :DDD

o god no. i wuld kill any1 who got me prego.
~Andrea
LMFAO. Love that line !

And I think we find out more about Kennethh ? :)

I agree with SuKawaii's first theory ! Since it seems to flow more with the storyline and what we know of the characters so far. [BTW , your comments are extremely entertaining to read. :D]

I love Drai && Andrea , but then I really really really want Christopher and Andrea to end up together for some odd reason ? (maybe the cute-ness of the 'skipping school' chapter?)

Oh ! And your story caught my attention because there is great irony behind it:
I like a guy at my school, and everyone knows it but him. -.- And I mean EVERYONE. SO the title caught my attention, then I read the summary, and was kind of creeped out about how much it related to my life at the moment. But then I read that the main girl's name is ANDREA. Which is my name.... :/
So just one question for you:
Are you stocking me ? (;
Ahahaha , love the story, please update soon ! <3

I agree with the first theory ^

Anywho, loved the update! <3

OKAY! So, one, thank you for finally updating(: lol and two...

I have created a theory, though the person above gave me another one. My first theory that I'd originally came up with is the Camille likes Christopher so when he held her hand yadi yadi she was blushing and all that adorable stuff she was really happy. HOWEVER once Andrea and Drai came back all lovey-dovey and Chris-y was all heartbroken and stuff, Camille realized (because you gave her the ability to easily read emotions) that Chris liked Andrea and that made her sad and she wasn't actually mad staring at Andrea and Drai but more jealous than anything and then when Chris caught her staring, she was all bubbling with unhappy emotions, knowing he didn't really like her (AWWW!!! TT~TT MY POOR BABY~ *hugs Camille-y*

And the second theory I got from the person above is that Camille really likes Drai and not Chris-y (I don't know why I'm calling him Chrisy XDD) and she was jealous. Or something.

But I think the first one is more realistic because she WAS blushing and acting all happy with Chris, plus it makes a bit more sense in my mind. I'm sure she must have realized Andrea liked Drai so... yeah :P something like that XD

Anyway!! Thank you for updating x) I hope you liked reading my theories lol and please update soon!!!! (PS: I updated my story<3)

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ohhh it looks like a big love fest lol a big square and two dont relise it love this i want more soon please

OH CRAP! In my last comment I meant to say holding hands with Camille.... heh-heh ^-^''' whoopsies.....

Update soon XDD

aww thats so cute love this i want more

Oh it was very cute! But I am afraid of what Chris is gonna think... poor guy. Maybe Camille can distract him though.

D'awww <33 That was so cute!! I love Drai <33 hahaha!

I can't help but wonder what you plan to do about Christopher though, seeing as in the last chapter you said he was in love with Andrea, yet this chapter he's holding hands with Andrea...? I don't know, I'm trying to think if you're planning something or not, but I can only guess that something big is going to happen. Maybe. Or maybe not.

If anything though, Drai and Andrea made me squeal in delight <33333 :tehe:

Keep up the good work!!! Update soon ;D

OMG I LOVE this!:)
Drai & Andrea :)

Whuh-oh... this won't end well.

aww thats so cute i want no i need more please and thank you

Second comment ;D

Sorry it took awhile, I was a bit busy when you updated ^-^'

ANYWAY! When you said on my page that it was "short and important" I sort of expected something ;D hahahahahaha!

This chapter was short and sweet :) Cuuuuuuuuute and I don't think I woudl have realized anything, except looking back now I guess I should have XD :tehe:

However, now, I really need to get an update to see what happensssss!!! I'm trying to figure out how you'r going to do this as of right now; if it'll turn into a love triangle with Andrea or something. But as of right now, I'm just creating theories :3 UPDATE SOON!

This was a very cool chapter; I loved hearing about Christopher's record of fighting. It was quite interesting and gave a nice look into his life of fighting :tehe:

Another thing that was cute was the little Romeo and Juliet video :3 It reminded me of last semester, where I played Juliet in my schools production of it. Haaaaa..... good times XDDD But really, it was very cute :3

Now, I can only wonder what poor Drai and Camille are doing without their best friends. LOL And with Heather the Ho on the loose, who knows what could be occuring. :tehe: (I gave her a nickname thanks to that commenter up thurr ^^)

Update soon!!!! (:

I think I missed commenting last time...I like Christopher :) He's got spunk.

*peers up at last commenter* "Don't trust a ho, never trust a ho, don't trust a ho, don't trust meee!!!"
:tehe: Sorry, but that was just begging me to say that :3

Seriously? Heather's being naughty already? Never trust a ho...Oops - excuse my language. Chris has a record? Well, now I'm a lot more interested in him.