Trust Me, You'll Feel Good - Comments

Wow! Silent reader here but just wanted to say what great stories this and the prequel were! I stayed up reading it from start to finish, couldn't stop!

NOO!! IT CANT BE A TWO HOT!! NOO!! I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!!

WHAT THE FACK!?
THIS IS ONLY A TWOSHOT!?
-headdesk-

I thought that I would have this fullblown (<-- tehe. x3) story sequel thingy to read.
AND I DON'T GET IT!?
-huffs-

Okay.
Fine.
Bye.
I'm going to finish the other one, and then read this one. >.>

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BYE.
D<

loves this!! keep writting

smexy ;)

This is going to be the most epic comment ever.

:D

Pretty impressive, right?

aww why not?

no no no you need to keep writeing or ill cry :'(

I'm really gonna miss this story.
Thanks for updating this for the last time :D <3

I'll miss this story.

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anywho
i love it ;D
i think i wanna have zombie babies with this *-*

i broke my laptop from humping my screen so much from this awesome story :o
oh well

sadly it ends but i love it :3

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Okay, time for my comment on Trust Me (XD) because I didn't post on the other story.
Mmkay, First off, Trust Me made me love BVB all the more because it seemed like the personalities fit them and such. Even if the members weren't gay with each other (damn...) It didn't help getting over my fandom at all. Just, you know, made it worst xD Honest to God, one of the best band slashes out there. One of the I'mma-Stay-Up-All-Night-To-Finish-It-Even-Though-I-Have-Homework-and-Finals-Are-Tomorrow. It was the perfect length, and the mixture of comedy without being overly cliche topped it off. The graphicness on all the sex scenes (=^.^=) was (also) perfect. It made you feel like you were the character, without making it feel like you were going to have nightmares about how disturbing it was. The split authorness made it feel like the characters had their own voices with two different ways of writing and seeing things.
About the foursome~~
I'm good with about anything. Rape, Incest, slash, 3-through-any-number-somes, and the likes, so really I didn't have a probably with the birthday butt secks^>^ I actually quite enjoyed it. Perfect details, and was kinky enough to be a supa-mega-awesome-gay-foursome. The ending to the first chapter was mage cute^.^
So in short... You both now have a fangirl for life<3

this actually made me cum o.e
lmfao but hey its a JAWEOSME STORY *-*
OMFG your an amazing writer

and i would so marry this story *-*

I can't wait to read more :D

Whoooooops:

Okaaaay, I'm gonna do my wrap up comment now, even though I believe there are 2 chapters in this.

You two lovelies have defied my belief in BVB stories.
Most of the ones I find suck ass and never reach ten stars, nor are they finished.
But this one was!! And I'm very proud. :)
Even with Nicole getting grounded, it still got finished. Those few weeks were absolutely miserable for me because 1) I love Nicole, and 2) I love this story like my own child.

I dunno what I'm gonna do without this story o.o

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Ahem.

I've met two wonderful friends thanks to this story :')
Nicole - my lovely co-writer, lover, awesometastic buddy.
Vlad (Vodka, Voddy) - my second sassy gay friend, whose wonderful-ness outshines Jesus. You're the first one I've known to achieve Jesus-status.

And I remember the time Kristen and I spammed the story, successfully bumping the number of comments up to 300-something. I can’t help but wonder whatever happened to Kristen. Apparently she was having some kind of drama or whatever. She commented on all of our stories :’(

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The foursome scene...

It was very…interesting. Like, I’m okay with anything – bestiality, incest, Asian girls puking into each other’s mouths…but for some reason polyamorous (sp?) relationships have always freaked me out. I think that’s mostly because my momma has always taught me to beat the hell out of anyone who cheats on me. Nonetheless, this was still written well, and it was enjoyable to read.

But part of the time, I was like:

D:<
Because Cc belongs to Andy! And kissing (among other things…) is frowned upon in most slash stories.

BY THE WAY. I love the layout for this. It’s cute and the colors look like little gay ribbons :)

I can’t help but wonder, though, if this is what all gays do in their spare time… Like, all get together and do unspeakably attractive things. I mean, I know it’s done…sometimes, but I wonder if all gay guys have secret alter-lives where they go out and do stuff like this daily…

Probably not, but you never know.

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Anyway, the plot for the story was fantastic. It was consistent all throughout and it wasn’t too dramatic. I usually get annoyed when the plot is all over the place and too dramatic. I think we can all agree that reading a story with lots of fluff and sexual things is much more fun than a story with a plot that makes your face like this: -_-

Hmm…I guess the only thing I could say that could be improved would be to show things instead of telling. For example, in chapter five, it says:

Why am I afraid of him? I guess it's because of my mother. She was killed by the person I trusted most. My best friend. My uncle. He had to audacity to send me a letter saying he was sorry.

I think that could’ve been projected better than it was. Like, I doubt someone could connect a problem so instantaneously to a traumatic experience.

But I could be wrong. You never know.

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Ohh my God…there’s a show about eating foreskins on.
I don’t wanna watch it.
It’s disgusting.
Goodbye.
I love both of you.
You wrote one of my favorite Mibba stories…ever.
Ever.
Ever.
It was amazing.
I’m about to cry out of proud-ness for both of you!!
:’D

Anyway, Carolyn is going now. And she typed up this comment on word because she always seems to hit the back button when she’s halfway through typing up a really long comment.

Why?

Because:

Lmao.The last line made me laugh too much.xD
Ahhh Andy. *.*
Yum.!

I am already liking this ^v^