Thirty Odd Occurrences In Your Everyday Life - Comments

The second-person writing style is very creative, and this seems to be the first story that I've read that can actually pull it off. Plus I love the layout.
What is also amazing is how someone can turn a simple picture into a detailed, descriptive, and simply beautiful work of art. Congratulations.

I'm completely speechless here. This was absolutely amazing. I've never seen/read anyone write about a crash in such a vivid language. Honestly, I'd never expect anyone to write about a crash so vividly. I'm so sorry about this comment sucking, but I'm really, truly speechless. It was amazing; the language, the details, the descriptions - everything fell together perfectly into a horrible - I mean, a car crash is awful and horrible, duh - but yet beautiful picture. Like I said, this was amazing!
Lovely job! <3

Wow, I got to say that I truly enjoyed it. You have amazing writing skills and I could just picture everything that you were talking about. Your writing is simply flawless and made for a very good read. Great job :)

This is amazing! I was hoping someone would do a crash. I love it, absolutely love it. Also the way it starts. You don't know anything about the character, where she was going, or anything! It's going to keep me wondering and it's going to keep me interested. Your spelling, your punctuation, your grammar.... it's amazing! You turned it in quickly, and this is just... awesome! You're amazing, I can't wait for tomorrow to see what else you're going to do!