I did notice one grammatical error in the beginning when you were talking about her parents feeding her, but other than that I loved it.
When she was talking about her parents and the way kids treated her at school I cried. Your writing always seems to make me cry. It's crazy how people can judge you on the little things like skin color and attitude.
You are a truly gifted writer! I think this is your best work yet :)
I can relate to Lynne, although I've never actually tried to take my life. Just how sometimes I think people don't care, even though deep down I know that they do. I can honestly say that some of my really good friends are here on mibba.