Call Me Grace... - Comments

  • AcademyKid

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    That was a wonderful piece of writing. Beautiful. <3
    January 6th, 2012 at 10:31pm
  • livelifetolove

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    I did notice one grammatical error in the beginning when you were talking about her parents feeding her, but other than that I loved it.

    When she was talking about her parents and the way kids treated her at school I cried. Your writing always seems to make me cry. It's crazy how people can judge you on the little things like skin color and attitude.
    March 26th, 2011 at 11:59am
  • Chasing Cars

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    That was really good I liked it:)
    March 8th, 2011 at 11:44pm
  • Speeding Cars

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    I really liked this, I am usually lazy with reading, but you had me enthralled the whole time.
    February 25th, 2011 at 06:37am
  • JJonas_CQuiseng

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    You are a truly gifted writer!
    I think this is your best work yet :)

    I can relate to Lynne, although I've never actually tried to take my life.
    Just how sometimes I think people don't care, even though deep down I know that they do.
    I can honestly say that some of my really good friends are here on mibba.

    <3 Katherine
    February 24th, 2011 at 01:32am