Marie - Comments

in love.

I love this so much. Marie and Toby's relationship gives me chills. It's so fucked up and sad yet beautiful and I can't even express how amazing your writing is. I'm sooo in love with this. These are such interesting and amazing characters you've created I agree with AHLICE. Please become a bestseller so I can buy all of your books. You're so talented.

God damn, why do you write so well? Like, people always say this shit to make people feel all good and give them heartburn (in the good way?) about their writing, but I'm so serious. You write better than most books I've read, and they've been published as bestsellers. I don't even know where to begin, Hannah. Though I will say that I'm biased. I am. I've sought out to befriend pretty much only the authors on Mibba that I feel are so good at writing, and you're certainly one of them.

This is so articulate. It's straightforward, resolute, yet murky, depending on perspective. I dead honest felt so jealous reading this. You're incredible. I wish I could try and point out a flaw so far, but this is such a good opening -- and usually openings are so fucking boring to me. My favorite author is Fitzgerald, and I have to say that his openings really bore me. But this pulled me in instantly, and the way you'd poetically work around Toby and Marie's relationship, their life growing up, the half-drowning and blaming for their mother's death -- god damn. You told so much (and so little) in these few paragraphs, and it was gorgeous.

You have me excited. You need to get something published. You need to become a bestseller. I have found your destiny, and it's writing. It has to be.

Toby and I had no concept of grief, because we hadn't ever loved anyone except each other.

What the fuck. This is beautiful. You need to write more.

okay so all of this series is amazing I can't handle this YOU'RE AWESOME this is awesome oh my lord.

HOLY SHIT i stumbled upon Alfie (love that name) and then i just read all of them right now i'm gonna come back and leave an actual good comment on all of them soon but shit this is amazing this is beautiful especially alfie's and danny's wow wow wow i am in love with you wow

Brilliant, brilliant update.

so so good and nothing like i expected marie to be but in an amazing way in the sense where your writing always surprises me and that's why you're a great author and wow danny and alfie are my favourite

I love, love, love the update!

Just, Wow.

holy shit

speechless.

proper comment later! but i love this already.

This Marie sounds a lot like another girl I know. :)
But oh my gosh--I am SO EXCITED.

you are a genius with words and inspiring and you are amazing and I love you for it!

:3