Whatever You Say - Comments

^ Thank you so much for informing me. :)

I like your story so far!
Just so you know swim teams have meets, not games, and swimmers swim events that consist of laps instead of routes.
Other than that, I like your story and think you should definitely continue!

Me encanta :D
Quiero que se acabe, pero no, a la misma vez.
Osea, quiero leer el final, pero no quiero que se acabe todavia.

lol, me encanto el final. <3

I just found this story, and I'm really enjoying reading it. I like C.J.'s inner-conflict regarding the pills. It makes the story quite interesting.
As I was reading, though, I noticed quite a few errors (mainly of the grammatical variety), so I would suggest maybe getting a beta to proof your stuff. The story itself is good, but the errors are a bit distracting. Update soon! :)

So far i really like it!
Thanks for writing!
I'm so excited to see what's next! :)

“That would be cool. A hero for the underestimated and judged!” she yelled excitedly.
“Yeah, like us.”

:D Yo quiero ese superheroe. C.J. es mi amigo. Oficialmente.

I like this so far, would be great to see how the story progresses. You should keep writing it. :)