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  • Jacey

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    Hey there, just came across your story and I've really been enjoying it! Please update soon!
    November 8th, 2014 at 06:48am
  • ChristyRawr

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    Amazing story please update soon!:D
    January 3rd, 2012 at 01:23am
  • fightmytongue

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    amanda should just go, obviously not wanted...
    happy birthday btw C:
    December 31st, 2011 at 11:52am
  • CharleeScene.

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    can she pplease be with Oli!!! xD awesome update
    December 23rd, 2011 at 03:46pm
  • CandyxSkull

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    Eeepies, I'm finally reading this!! I just read chapter one and it's so good so far :) Can't wait to continue! Subscribing!
    November 21st, 2011 at 11:05pm
  • ChristyRawr

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    I really like this story keep updating I want to see what happens.:)
    November 17th, 2011 at 03:10am
  • Formosa.

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    Sooo good :3 Updates? ^.^
    November 5th, 2011 at 10:33am
  • crayolaurworld

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    Loving it! I told you it would work out fine! :)
    March 23rd, 2011 at 02:49am
  • crayolaurworld

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    Loving the update girl! :) There where a few spelling errors, so be on the look out for those- you don't want any of those crazy people to report you.
    March 17th, 2011 at 07:26pm
  • Chelsea's Dead Smile

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    You can kind of see in your latest chapter that Oli left a deep emotional rift that Payton can't climb over with just seeing him again. He did something that has branded his name on her heart and it burns when she sees him.

    I hope you update soon ^_^
    March 17th, 2011 at 12:02pm
  • crayolaurworld

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    I really like this update! It let's you into the twin's world a bit, so you see how they deal with their disabilities. So far they are the most intriguing characters. :) I can't wait for some Oli action!! I emailed you your banner today, so hopefully you love it! Update soon!
    March 14th, 2011 at 11:05am
  • crayolaurworld

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    This update is wonderful, I'm glad more people are reading! Your story is off to a great start,update soon! :)
    February 27th, 2011 at 08:43am
  • Loud Papers

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    I like it :) subcribed. Keep it up.
    February 26th, 2011 at 06:22am
  • crayolaurworld

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    I'm taking your comment virginity, love. ;)

    I think this story is off to a wonderful start. Keep the chapters coming and people will see it, as well. If you send me two or three pictures of Payton I'll make a banner for you to get the ball rolling, eh? I'm going to post a link to your story in my next update, do the same for me? :)
    February 26th, 2011 at 05:01am