You can kind of see in your latest chapter that Oli left a deep emotional rift that Payton can't climb over with just seeing him again. He did something that has branded his name on her heart and it burns when she sees him.
I really like this update! It let's you into the twin's world a bit, so you see how they deal with their disabilities. So far they are the most intriguing characters. :) I can't wait for some Oli action!! I emailed you your banner today, so hopefully you love it! Update soon!
I think this story is off to a wonderful start. Keep the chapters coming and people will see it, as well. If you send me two or three pictures of Payton I'll make a banner for you to get the ball rolling, eh? I'm going to post a link to your story in my next update, do the same for me? :)