Going Somewhere - Comments

This was a very nice idea; I happen to like how the main character speaks directly to the reader, almost. It's like you're watching a movie and it's just so perfect and sweet the way the main character - I think I skipped over their name; I do apologize, it's getting a bit late here >.< - talks about Alice. And I do like Alice. She really is a spunky and cute character; she seems like the kind of character that everyone can be friends with :D fkdsjakfask this was absolutely adorable! I'll definitely be coming back to read more when I can. <3
Lovely job!

This is a good story.
I like how you directly speak to the reader, it made me think of a film which I can't put my finger on where there was a narrator of it and it was in the same friendly tone.
I think this has great potential, you just need to grow the characters a bit more!
Well done!