My Feelings for You Last Forever - Comments

comment swap!
Im not much of a Black Veil Brides person but this really good. I enjoy the plot and how it is placed. Its a fun story. I really like the layout and I hope that there is more to come in the near future. because ths is a wicked story :)

This thing is all kinds of awesome. i hope you know that :)

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Going to be completely honest with you, I hate BVB. So, you can imagine, that put a bit of an instant downer on my perspective of this fic. For that reason, your story did not completely grab me and I did not read past the first few chapters.

However, I can comment on your writing style. I loved the way you went straight into the story, which made it seem more interesting, and also your little witty comments from the characters are great. Your writing is great, even if your particular story is not to my taste (nothing to do with you, that's my personal preference, I'm afraid).

I couldn't see any spelling or grammatical mistakes which is great, so yeah, so far, so good from what I read! Good luck with the rest of your writing. : )

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I have no idea who this is about to be honest, but i actually quite enjoy it. i love that i can here her voice as i read it. i get a feeling of who she is. the witty comments are my favorite. keep up the good work. you are doing great!

xharlow!!!z

damn...are we all from comment swap??? :)
anyhooooo.....cute story kiddo!!
i like it lots and BVB is a pretty freaking amazing band
xD

Comment swapper here!

Honestly speaking, this is my very first BVB fanfic I've read. I only read the first two chapters and I must say it's pretty funny. Like the way Courtney spewed all those vulgarities out of her mouth. I was smiling when I read that.

I had to do a bit of googling on BVB because honestly, I've no idea about them at all. I mean, I did hear about them and their frontman, Andy Biersack, but that's as much as my knowledge takes me. The guy's pretty cute and it's such a waste to hide all that beauty underneath thick makeup. Come to think about it, they resemble so much of Japanese visual kei bands. Pretty boys all hidden underneath thick makeup.

Overall, pretty cute story involving scary-looking dudes (who are pretty cute). LOL. I don't make sense

Hey! Comment swap brought me here! I liked that you just started the story, jumping in to it and you had some witty things in it. There was some fun insults and I love when there's humor in stories ^^ I don't really like BVB that much but the story is really good! :)

Hey, I'm from comment swap :) This story seems to be headed in the right direction, I only read the first two chapters but already the plot is flowing and the characters are strong. I've also never read a BVB skater fic before, haha. Good luck with this :)

This is a really good story. I like how you don't write about the past first, that kind of irks me. But anywhoo, really good. :) I love your insults, hehe. Creative. :) Keep up the good work! :)

I like how you go straight into the story :) This was really entertaining to read and some of the insults you used were really funny: douchecannoe for example. I want to find someone I can use it on now, even if they will think I'm weird.

I just found this story, so I'm just now commenting. I want to know what happens next though!

Don't shout at us!!! lol

Hopefully you get your four comments :)

cute :]