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Yay the Morgan family is all finally back on track... i hate to see this story got but I enjoyed the ride... you're awesome wifey....

Wow. I have to say i love your avenged stories, but this original was really quite amazing. I am excited to see that you have updated and been writing, youre definitely one of my favorite writers.

Man it's been a while since this story!
SO this is the end and they are pregnant again and their baby is going to be a boy!
All in all they are happy and Marcus has realized through the pain they both went through, how much Melodie means to him.
He almost lost her but he was able to win her back.
This is amazing story!
Great Job!!!!!

i can't believe it... I have missed so much... but I'm back now and I think that they should work it out because it so clear that they still love each other... I can't wait for more awesome job wifey!!!!!

Love the story, I can't wait to read more. Update soon!!

Aw so this story is coming to an end?
Well like her best friends, I hope that she is happy and giving Marcus a second chance will make her happy.
I was really rooting for Nick to be the one to sweep her off her feet.
But I guess Marcus and Melodie need each other more than.
And they are going to start over again.
I can't wait for the next update!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Man losing the baby really is making things hard for both Marcus and Melodie.
Because the Marcus had the baby room ready and then he had to take it back down.
I feel really sad for both of them because they were looking forward to the baby.
Maybe this time, this help them get closer and help each other heal.
And if not then Nick will be there for Melodie.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Wow not only did she lose her husband (because of his stupidity) but also her baby girl?
Man that is really sad, and she got everything for the baby, then the baby was taken away from her.
I wonder if they will still go through with the divorce because she really needs someone right now.
I hope that opens Marcus's eyes up and finally realize that he is going to lose Melodie.
I still want Nike to comfort her and maybe Marcus will fall under the pressure and go back to cheating if he isn't doing that already.
Then Nike can be the Knight in shining armor!!!!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!
Man I cam completely pissed off at Marcus because he ended his marriage by sleeping with a whore.
I can't wait for karma bit him in the ass.
And she was married to him for five years and faithful to him!!!!!!!!
WHAT HELL IS WRONG WITH HIM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!???????????????????
Yeah I can tell he really loves yeah right......he just gave up on her and he's not even going to fight for her.
Maybe Nike will be the one to help through the pregnancy and Marcus can feel the pain of Nick and her are happy while he is all alone with whores to feel the hole in his chest for a few hours.
Where as Nick will always be there for her and make sure she is happy!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD

She should totally leave Marcus that what I like. he doesn't deserve another chance.... plus I like Nick better. He still cares for her and I don't think he would cheat on her with a total trash bag.... love the update more soon.

Wow now that was hot!!!! Is he trying to get here pregos so she won't leave if she thinks he cheating? That's something to think about! As always loved the update awesome job!!!! More soon

I'M HERE!!!

You're my writing soulmate too. I know how hard you work and I love everything you come up with. I don't know why people will read it but not comment so I will as long as you write. I do it because you're a great writer and if people would just take the chance and read it even if Avenged isn't in it they will see why. Keep it coming and I love this story so far and can't wait for more. Plus you're my wifey so I have to support you it's what I do. LOL XOXO

More I love it and as always amazing can't wait for more!!!!!