or was it ang oh god im making a fool of myself! its been forever since Ive watched that interview..OK IM A BAD FAN I GET IT!! LAUGH AT ME because im laughing at myself right now....alright im done makign a fool out of me....
MAN I SPENT THE LAST.....uh......lets say couple hours....COUPLE HOURS LAUGHING AND BASICALLY BAWLING AT THIS STORY DAMN YOU!! xD You got MIW PERFECT!!!! Lol Ryan does not do well with crying girls I laughed so hard remember that interview...ok so I must DEMAND more!!
I'm gonna warn you straight off the bat, I may come off as a bitch, so I apologize in advance. However, I would really like to help you both with your writing, and the only way to do that is to be brutally honest.
Oh shit, I already sound like a bossy asshole. I'm sorry D:
Anyhoo, both of you have potential, I'm not gonna lie, but writing is something that takes lots and lots of time, blood, sweat, and tears in order to become truly skilled. I could point you in the right direction if you want, just shoot me a message. Otherwise, I really do like the idea of this story, and some parts of it made me laugh out loud. But like most beginning literature, there are definatetly improvements that could be done.
But never, ever, ever give up on writing. If it's what you truly love to do, then stick with it, no matter how good or how bad you are. After all, success is measured in the joy you get from it, not based on how much money you make off of it. I wish you guys the best of luck on whatever you write, and if you want help, I, uhm, could help you. You know, edit and stuff. Or just give you pointers^^
I just started reading your story. I'm glad I found it when searching for MIW stories. I laughed when I saw that Ricky and Linda went and see Insidious on their date. I just watched the movie recently myself. I ended up laughing a lot during it though. I don't know why.. Haha. I like this story! I'm gonna go read it some more! Hope you have a great day! :D
Can I be in the story forserious? I wanna be Balz's girlfriend :3 If I can, I'll send you the info later because I'm on my phone right now... IN OTHER NEWS this story is great :)