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  • Squirrely.Kassi

    Squirrely.Kassi (100)

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    I like the concept of the story, it's raw and lovely. If you could though, edit the layout and make the letters bigger. It's kind of hard to read, that'll be the only issue I see with the story and readers. Hope my constructive critism helps. :]
    April 13th, 2011 at 03:04am
  • so it goes

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    I love this even though it's one chapter.
    I think you should update it. (:
    March 12th, 2011 at 07:12pm
  • pikachuz.

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    Okay, so, um.
    I really like this. D: like, a lot.
    And the fact that you have ADTR lyrics as the title is just ajdsjkfks amazing.
    Subscribed fosho. :D
    March 4th, 2011 at 03:50am
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