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  • silk tea.

    silk tea. (400)

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    I have a feeling the reason this is getting hardly any attention is because of the title and because of the summary. They aren't interesting at all, they don't make me want to read this because I find nothing that will draw me in or make this seem worthy of my attention. That's the downfall of this and that's the only reason this isn't getting the notification it deserves. Change the title, change the summary and change the layout. Because that's why no one wants to read this.

    The content is beautiful. The way you describe writing and the way you word everything is perfect. It's a great piece, I just think you need to give it the recognition it deserves with a proper title and summary.
    February 26th, 2011 at 04:17am
  • So Mi Shught

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    Every writer, any writer everywhere can relate to this. You wrote the truth very beautifully. I like this. I like it a lot.

    You may want to take a look at the second paragraph, though. I believe you made a small mistake with the spelling of 'effortlessly.' It's okay, I do it all the time.
    February 24th, 2011 at 02:19am
  • R.I.O.T

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    WOW, I love this. Beautiful language. Stunning pictures you create in the readers mind.
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    February 23rd, 2011 at 05:13pm
  • jagkt0thefuture

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    Awehhh this is so beautiful and so true. It's made me feel alive inside (: a truly amazing piece.
    February 22nd, 2011 at 12:18am
  • teenagemutantme

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    I can't believe there are no comments to this, this is an absolutely beautiful piece you have here!
    February 21st, 2011 at 10:54pm