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  • xobatbrat

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    Your writing style is so beautiful. I actually felt like I was watching a movie in my mind, it's SO descriptive. I absolutely adore this story.
    November 9th, 2014 at 06:08am
  • Justsouno

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    I was just about to go find another story to read when I saw that you asked for no silent readers and I feel like comments on stories should help a writer become a better writer. So my advice you to help you become a better writer is proof read there were a few tiny mistakes that many people would not notice one example is in the first paragraph "I would not choose “loyal” like Lindsey Wilson, who I had personally watched lie straight her boyfriend’s face as he died from a bullet wound to the chest the very next day." in this sentence you forgot the word to.... Thank you for the wonderful story
    July 24th, 2014 at 06:19am
  • NothinNNomore

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    OMG. I love it :) can't wait for the next update<3
    April 8th, 2011 at 01:34am
  • lilia spinas.

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    I REALLY like this. :) Very interesting. I can't wait for more!
    March 27th, 2011 at 09:26am
  • MirrorRain

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    Oh my gosh, its GONE!?!? Where'd it goooo!??
    March 13th, 2011 at 04:52am
  • NaiveDove

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    I like this story so far
    March 12th, 2011 at 10:30pm
  • PATDROCKS!

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    I love it already!! Can't wait for more :D
    March 12th, 2011 at 09:52pm
  • NothinNNomore

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    I really like this :) I can't wait for the next update.
    March 8th, 2011 at 09:33pm
  • alvina

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    i like this....very much :) just waiting on an update. ive officially subscribed :)
    March 5th, 2011 at 12:51am
  • erika_xtc

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    This sorta intrigued me at 4 in the morning lmao Hope you update soon, would love to see her freak out over getting a letter from a dead guy haha.
    March 4th, 2011 at 11:54pm
  • Jack-Likes-Thrust

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    Plz? (forgot to add that, my bad..)
    March 4th, 2011 at 07:03am
  • Jack-Likes-Thrust

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    This story sounds interesting.. It's very good so far :). Update soon! :D
    March 4th, 2011 at 07:02am