I like that the chapters are short and to the point- I think that if you'd made them longer, they wouldn't have had the same effect as it did.
I also like that (once you brought her back), even though they both love each other, and have admitted how much they missed each other, you made sure that it was said that things wouldn't be the same as it had been. It made it feel real.
I like that the chapters are short and to the point- I think that if you'd made them longer, they wouldn't have had the same effect as it did.
I also like that (once you brought her back), even though they both love each other, and have admitted how much they missed each other, you made sure that it was said that things wouldn't be the same as it had been. It made it feel real.