Near, Far, Wherever You Are - Comments

please update soon.

@ Justice Rader
Hehe I can't say it's going to be a surprise! But thank you for the comment!

its so sad about rose. why cant jack just go to rose he has a plan doesnt he?

@Jayme112234 omgbthank your for telling me :) and thank you for the comment!

Loved the latest chapter... just so you know it posted twice xx

what??? jacks alive??? cant wait to see how rose takes it.

YAY Jack is alive... can't wait to see what happen's when Amanda and Rose find out that he's alive xx

Hello there. Xd I was brought to this kind of unique story of yours from comment swap. Now you wonder why I said kind of unique and not just unique. To me its unique cause its the first fanfic i read about Titanic but there may be more of them on mibbaland. I don't know yet. You could make the summary more interesting as well as the title cause they didn't pull me in, not at all. Only the mention of Titanic made me wanna read this and that's a shame because your writing skills are good. That's all from me, bye. Xd

Hello there. Xd I was brought to this kind of unique story of yours from comment swap. Now you wonder why I said kind of unique and not just unique. To me its unique cause its the first fanfic i read about Titanic but there may be more of them on mibbaland. I don't know yet. You could make the summary more interesting as well as the title cause they didn't pull me in, not at all. Only the mention of Titanic made me wanna read this and that's a shame because your writing skills are good. That's all from me, bye. Xd

heya, just read the first chapter of your story, it is not exactly my cup of tea but i will do my best to analyze. First the introductory section where your charecter is not on the titanic is quite short, a few ideas... you could a. cut this section entirely, have your lead wake up on the titanic in sentence one and not know what is going on, you could then either have a flashback or tell backstory through internal narrative, starting "in the middle of things" is a classic technique to increase drama and the readers emotinal investment in the story. or b. stretch out this first section, establish your charecters traits and then it will be a "fish out of water" story when she wakes up on the titanic.
the other thing that strikes me immediately is the idiosyncratic dialougue, notice how in the actual titanic movie the charecters talk differently than modern people, your people seem a little too modern, it might also be interesting to have your protagonist speak strangely and have to learn how to speak properly

I really enjoy this story please update soon.

YAY! Thank you for the update, Please more soon.

I really love this!! :) Titanic is such a great movie and I loved how you made something different! :)

I really liked this, but I felt it went a little too fast and you were omitting some detail. Overall, good story though. :)

i love the chapter that u recently updated it was AWESOME please update soon thanx =-D

please update sonn

I know that was a morbid chapter, well, not as morbid as the ship sinking, but I couldn't help but find it funny. Maybe it's because I know the movie so well, or just because I see morbid things funny, I don't know.

Regardless, it was a wonderful update, and I've been waiting for the longest time to see that this one got updated in my subscriptions. :)

~Lady

Great update!!!
Please UPDATE SOON!!!

I love this story :)

i like it, but can't you make the font smaller pleaseeeee (:
thankssss <3