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  • sierraye

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    awesome story! update please! :)
    December 22nd, 2011 at 06:30am
  • Miss Sanders

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    awesome story i really enjoy it.
    December 10th, 2011 at 08:50pm
  • HappyHippo

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    I really like this story :) The non-famous-characters are unique and and have flaws which make them more likeable. You can comprehend their backgroundstory very well, that's good because many stories have kind of holes in their plot, mainly the background stories.
    but the text is a bit hard to read because you've got two very bright colors as text and background colors, so could you please consider changing that?
    and I noticed you wrote something along the lines of 'his hand threw his hair' , this confused me a bit, because threw is the past tense of throw. Did you probably mean 'through his hair'?
    June 27th, 2011 at 08:53pm
  • Val Destiny Reaser

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    Super sorry! that my update took so long . . . life can get kinda crazy sometimes
    May 30th, 2011 at 03:29am
  • cindycannibal

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    So happy that's there's a new chapter. I was dying that there wasn't a ypdate
    May 25th, 2011 at 02:13am
  • cindycannibal

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    cant wsit until when martin talks to rumor about her wrist
    March 19th, 2011 at 08:19am
  • HeyyKa4tie

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    Update soon :)
    March 15th, 2011 at 05:51am
  • iVIVLA LA GLORIA

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    oh my god its really good post more soon please
    March 3rd, 2011 at 03:39am
  • cindycannibal

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    awesome and that was sweet of her to give the chips to the homeless women
    February 28th, 2011 at 10:15am
  • cindycannibal

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    haha i wish martin went to a store with me with no pants on
    February 27th, 2011 at 09:02am
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