Just read this story & I love it! I think I need a glass of water or how sweet it was!!! Just great!!! Beautifully written. I just wanted to let you know... I know it's almost a year later, but I firmly believe that if you like a story, then you should let the writer know. & I love it!
Before I get into reading the story, I must say that I really love the banner picture that you chose, and I especially love the way the layout flows together. I always notice a layout first, and it’s gorgeous. I love your style of writing. It’s very elegant in a simplistic way, and I think that it speaks volumes for your talent as a writer. I think that you get the message across very easily. It reads easily, and it seems effortless, even though you obviously put a hell of a lot of effort into this. It simply flows very gorgeously, and I definitely love it. I love how precise Cassidy’s words are, and how emotional Matt is compared to her. I love the way it ended, too. I definitely think that your story has done the song, If I Fell, justice. It’s gorgeous, just like the song, and the emotion is all there. Good luck in the contest, and I’m sorry for the delay in commenting.