Milk - Comments

Hey! While I had read this story a few years back, I was recently reminded of it thanks to Gerard Way. He changed his twitter handle to Milk Friend and someome mentioned this to him so, naturally, he talked about it.... and he read it. He said it was really well written and he's definitely not wrong!

Have found the infamous Milk fic everybody talks about and I was not dissapointed!

@ HerNameIsAlice
My god too.

Ohhh.... my god....

Hey, I'm finally here to judge for the contest Chains, whips, fetishes, OH MY!.

First off, I've heard many things about this story, and I have been meaning to read it for awhile now to see what's up with it. It's fantastic. Your descriptions are perfectly fluid. I can picture what's going on without you actually painting a vivid picture. One sentence I really liked was, "Ryan flushed warm from the compliment, his wrist sliding down along his waist, hipbone, the curve of his ass. And then his fingers were poised." There's more to it, but I know you know what you wrote but I REALLY adored that line, adore is the wrong word, but it's just so... amazing.

There weren't any real grammatical errors that I really noticed, or any bumps in word usage, which is one key thing I look for when reading smut. However, there is a typo: squeezing his eyes shut, in the original text there's an i where the u should be.

All in all. Sorry, I comment as I read, so this bit will be more organized. I honestly loved everything about this story. It's was real it wasn't perfect horny smut where everyone was happy and everything was perfect. There was pain, there was the disappointment of having your significant other pull out without leaving anything behind.

I also loved the thought of a milk enema, though I've never had one, but I couldn't stop myself from thinking how it must feel and if it helps with the skin. Because milk-baths are GREAT for your skin. Sorry, I'm a bit off.

The ending was super cute. Just... I would rate this a 15/10. I LOVED it. Thank you so much for submitting this beautiful piece so that I could read it. :)

This story is always beautifully written and captivating, even on the 9th time around. It expresses the trust between two people and their love for eachother and I honestly can't explain it but this is just wonderful. I love it.

This story is always beautifully written and captivating, even on the 9th time around. It expresses the trust between two people and their love for eachother and I honestly can't explain it but this is just wonderful. I love it.

"squeezing his eyes shit"

This is butt lickin' good.

I think this was an amazing story and I mean it grasps the concept of both point of views in a BDSM relationship. Most of them don't really explain how the sub feels about it, I mean there are some that grasp the sub and the Dom similar to this story but I guess you have some authors who don't really understand how the Dom and the sub feel about each other but they write about it but because they don't understand they can't explain how they truly feel about each other. In other words great job!

While this story made me uncomfortable as it's not my fetish nor do I even find the idea of an enema pleasing in the slightest, after watching Brendon's video I had to take a read. And Dru, you never disappoint. As uncomfortable as it made me, I actually really enjoyed it. You got across how uncomfortable it made Ryan, too, with the cramping and that, and the humiliation afterwards - which no one else seems to write very well in fics like this, and I find that things like that and after-care are very important parts of sex. And it's really not that nasty in all honesty, there have been much worse things written out there (if anyone remembers the virgin cheerleader story). So thumbs up Dru, you never disappoint.

I don't think this is dirty at all. If you see past the kinky you see two people who love and trust each other enough to express their feelings and desires. Ryan trusts him so much that, even though he thinks he can't take it, he does it for Brendan because he loves him. I think that's beautiful.

Really well written too, I felt their love and passion for each other shining through the words. Now I am going to go and read the prequel and sequel! :D

Well done.

You wrote a fic with perfect spelling, punctuation and plot.

Most people are disgusted by it, but there have been much worse fics that have been written.

The whole situation is something that I'm sure not many people to agree too, but for me, I saw something that meant that they obviously had trust in this fic, which is why (for me) was very interesting.

well done author.

@ Ohmygeezyway
Yes, I know.

OH MY BARAKAT BRENDON KNOWS ABOUT THIS O_______O

This is so gorgeous! <3

This is the second time I've read this and I love it so much <3

People keep on saying how it's really gross, but it's not. If they could just see past the kinky stuff and realize how much love is shown between Brendon and Ryan, they would see how amazing this really is <3

Their relationship dynamic is absolutely fantastic in this. Fantastic fic, all in all! I'm really glad I read it!

I think I need a cigarette after reading this story, haha. Anyways, this was probably the most interesting one-shot I've read, better yet, the best thing I've ever read on Mibba. I love the feel of Brendon and Ryan's relationship. Also, I'm really loving the layout for the story, very neat and well-put together!

You have an amazing writing talent that other people would kill to have. <3

@ LilLamb
It's definitely an unusual kink. But I think the reason he says yes is because he has no choice. In giving up control, you give up choice. Sometimes it's a mental exercise just to see how far you can let yourself go.