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  • lyric01

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    YESSS!!!! Unfortunately i love this story very much which means i will comment on every update:D by the way when i first read the first chappie; i was like hecks yeah! A black vampire plus interracial relationship! You did a very good job on this story. It should be a book or something.Good writing! :) you should write a sequel! And yes its that good:D
    October 14th, 2011 at 02:10pm
  • standingintheneon

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    HOLY BALLSACS. Where have I been? WHERE HAVE I BEEEEEEN?
    Damn...
    October 14th, 2011 at 07:21am
  • BananaILoveYou.

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    :D YAY he lives
    October 8th, 2011 at 03:34am
  • you.twit.face.

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    Nooooooo!!! this is the only reason i come to mibba :/ please keep writing :D
    i loved that chapter and im soo happy hes a vampire! makes everything more exciting!!
    October 7th, 2011 at 07:23pm
  • reeseynicole21

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    Hey!!! I'm BACK and had to catch up on some reading to I still the story and I love the story still. How is everything going with things. Write back. Just showing some love....
    October 6th, 2011 at 09:57pm
  • CaliCupcakeMonster

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    Dont get stressed over comments not in your condition. It's not that big a deal rarely anyone comments now a days but you have me ; P Great chapter
    October 6th, 2011 at 05:04pm
  • Danieee

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    Noooo this story is incredible!!! I love it!!
    Cant wait to read more!!
    October 6th, 2011 at 03:41pm
  • UltraViolett

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    I'm back, needed to caught up on my updates xp
    For the last two chapter my face was like this : o.O
    Dang, first he died but then he came back! Yeah, they need to end up together!
    October 6th, 2011 at 01:21pm
  • rayne6661revenge

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    Yay!!! he lived.
    October 6th, 2011 at 06:46am
  • CandyLover

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    Nooo Keegan come back:o
    October 4th, 2011 at 04:04pm
  • CaliCupcakeMonster

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    I love keegan but he's incredibly stupid, aint that what loves does to you tho? lol Great chapter ; P
    October 4th, 2011 at 03:14pm
  • siren_cryer

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    Aww crackers, why is this happening?! I wanted Dorian back, but he is completely ruining Raven and Keegan's relationship! I hope Keegan is turned into a vamp, for it is not fair that he must suffer through another hearbreak. To Me... Raven and Keegan are destined to be, so hopefully sooner or later they will reunite.
    UPDATE SOON, PLEASE!
    October 1st, 2011 at 05:24pm
  • BananaILoveYou.

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    Damn<3 Enough said.
    October 1st, 2011 at 02:40am
  • CaliCupcakeMonster

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    cant wait to see what you got in store lol
    September 30th, 2011 at 06:46am
  • you.twit.face.

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    i loved this chapter!! please write more!! :D
    September 29th, 2011 at 06:25pm
  • UltraViolett

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    .....damn. Can't kill can she? No, cause that would be bad. How old is Dorian? Don't know yet, just know he's old. Hm...Keegan's mom got herself a cell phone, that is just too cute. I loved it and please update soon!! I want to know what's happening.
    September 29th, 2011 at 01:18pm
  • CaliCupcakeMonster

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    Damn damn damn!!!!!!! This one hell of a story ; ) Update soon lol
    September 29th, 2011 at 10:10am
  • you.twit.face.

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    Please update! I love this story soo much and you are by far one of the most amazing writers on mibba! keep it up! :D
    September 28th, 2011 at 04:39pm
  • siren_cryer

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    Whoot! Dorian in the house! Or on the sidewalk, actually...
    Anyway, I cannot wait to see how things turn out. It's this other thing that keeps nagging me.
    I remember that time that Raven let Keegan here her thoughts, and a couple of times Keegan swore that he heard Aspen. So I'm like wondering if she's a vampire herself?
    I don't want her ruining their relationship, but the facts can add up pretty easily.
    Depending on how bad that car accident, she might have had a closed-casket funeral, meaning, it didn't actually have to be her in the box. And even if it wasn't closed-casket, she could be a vamp., which means, NO BREATHING, COLD, HARD SKIN, AND EXTRA PALE. She would be able to claw her way out of the casket after being buried.
    Anyway, PLEASE, don't bring her back. Dorian is one thing, 'cause Raven never loved him, Aspen is a whole different episode.
    September 26th, 2011 at 06:50pm
  • UltraViolett

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    Finally, I was wondering when tall, dark and creepy was gonna be back. This is just getting good now!! I can't wait to see what happens next!!
    September 26th, 2011 at 01:43pm
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