I'm back and I read all 23 chapters that I missed. May I say, that you are an exceptionally talented writer? Who deserves to have her work turned into a novel? I am pleased with every event thus far. At first, I wanted Dorian to come back and create some mayhem, but now, I feel like Keegan and Raven are in a very good place. Why mess that up? But... then again.. we don't want the story to end right now, so you should throw a little more drama(Dorian) in there to make us literally wanna eat your plot. I'm past elated that Keegan's mother likes Raven. Seriously, who wants to date a person and have their special someone's mother dislike them? Lol UPDATE SOON!
Oh geez, so cute! I'm so glad she said yes! And I understood her reservations, but I'm glad Keegan was able to put her mind to rest!
Thanks for the dedication! If you read original fiction you ought to come around to my neck of the woods where I hide out on Wattpad. You can always find me there. ;) The only reason I come back to Mibba is to read your story. So keep up the good work! XD
Wow, in Japanese those chapters were KAWAII!! <3 (super cute) I hope Raven says yes yes yes! And what she said about her intentions was so sweet. That's all I would want from a lover. I will have to imagine Synyster Gates saying something like that about me in dreams tonight. lol
(Sorry for my absence. I have been busy writing a fanfiction AGAIN. That one really didn't go over well. Ehhhhh. I should stick to original fiction I guess. I just cant seem to write good fanfic anymore. People want easy stuff. I want hard stuff.)
Oh my motherfucking GOD (if I go to hell for that statement totally worth it) she has to say yes! But there relationship is not cliche so can her response not be cliche? Ya know the whole water, er bloodworks and the "Yes, yes, YES i'll marry you!"
Hold on let me stop drooling...ok, well great chapter as always and i'm glad she decided to meet his mother. I cant wait to see how that goes ; ) Update soon!!!!!!!!!!
Please let it be a good Mom visit. That would be nice :) Oh, I thought of this kinda of interesting idea. Raven hasn't seen her maker since she was turned. Wouldn't it be a creepy thing if he started dating Keegan's Mom? Or Jenna?
I really love his mom, she is a interesting woman. I hope Raven says yes to meeting his Mom. I think his Mom will like her, gonna have to come up with a good story for the appearance. Movie star..or something lol
I want to know about tomorrow, when it sinks in about what happened. Keeg sounded tired, might not have all sunk it. But if it did, that was sad. Blondie was very mean, and she did gets hers in a way.