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  • ImatanAllTimeLow

    ImatanAllTimeLow (100)

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    I actually really like this story! You should continue it! I'd like to see where it's going! :)
    November 12th, 2011 at 11:39am
  • heyJAYhey

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    I agree with the above comment, just make sure you watch the punctuation. Other than that, I love Zack stories, so I'm excited to see what's going to happen :D
    February 24th, 2011 at 12:46pm
  • GraceAndreSand

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    The writing's really good, but you need to have the proper punctuation. I'd love to read more though :)
    February 24th, 2011 at 12:03pm
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