Synful Demon - Comments

lol, i can't believe she shot matt!

I just read the entire story and I LOVED it! Amazing. Thanks for telling me to check it out. =)

it was rlly good...but sriously i would looove it if it was longer...like really developing their relationship and stuff,and then maybe Brian would actually turn against his ''team'' in order to go with her... ;)
but it was good :D

I liked this. It was an interesting topic choice & the plot was very original. I love the fact that you had A7X has demons but im sad it waasnt longer & we didnt get to go more in depth.

I'm a little sad its over -
but I'm glad it went out with a bang ;D

...pun intended

This was a badass story. I just liked the attitude and the emotion and everything. And i loved the way she just let it all go at the end. She just let him consume her and it was amazing. :) Awesome job.

Woahs, this was awesome :D
you describe things so clearly and Aria is an interesting character n.n
I's be a checking out yo' other stories, I'm glad you commented.

I'm glad you left a comment.
This is a good story :)

Thanks for your comment on my profile to check this story out :)
Its really good and original
-Crizz

Wow, I'm glad you left a comment to check out your stories.
This is your first A7X fan fiction? It's wicked (no pun intended).
:D

I agree with Elroclya Greenleaf^. The way you describe your story makes a vivid picture and allows you to see what Aria does. Her personality is what kept me interested because she isn't like other OCs in other stories, and she has a smart mind. I'm glad you commented on my page to look at your story.
;)

I'm glad I checked this out.
I'm one who's all up for original and unusual storylines so I really enjoyed this.
The introduction in your first chapter caught my attention for sure, starting with the lyrics from A Little Piece of Heaven, which you linked to something traumatic your main character lived through, and experienced. I also like how you brought her past into the story, which showed us a little bit of what she was capable of doing, which in this case we get to see a bit off throughout the story.
The physical aspect which you gave to Brian and Matt with the red rimmed eyes, which categorizes them as demons is pretty nifty, 'cause it gave a feel of vividness when you described them, so I could really imagine myself being Aria's eyes and seeing what she saw. 
I really love how Brian felt seriously confused when that 'trance' he tried to drag her in wouldn't work. Oh and I totally burst out laughing when he asked her to be his girlfriend. It was pretty nice. So I guess later on you kind of see how Aria turns ambivalent to the situation with Brian, 'cause she doesn't know what to think about him or feel towards him, for example when she's holding the gun to Matt and Brian is soothing her with his lies and she finally gives in.
The ending, I totally didn't expect it, which is definitely a plus.

I read your 'about me' section, and it said you like true criticism, so I promise I didn't bullshit you, I was honest :) I really liked this.

I personally loved this story.
Very unique and well written.
You're an extravagant writer
and I can't for some more
A7X's stories out of you(;

I've just started getting into Brian stories, and personally I really liked this.
Have you ever considered writing an actual story? Because I KNOW you should! ;)
I, too, love how you portray him in this-- it seems to fit him, realistically.
Overall, I la-la-loved the end ;) And thought it was a great story.
... Just wish there was more to read now that I am finished. :D
*hint hint ; wink wink*

<3 Sam.

Thanks for commenting on my short story. It was actually meant to be longer, but I had major writer's block so I ended it :P
I loved this! Especially the last chapter ;) Anything with Brian is good in my book and I love how you made him in this story :D
<3

*tear* It's done. *claps*
IT WAS BEAUTIFUL! =)
I hope to read more a7x stories from you in the future. <3

I appreciate all of your comments so much- thank you for sticking with me until the end!

Wow, talk about being in an awkward situation. You're going to update soon, right? RIGHT? ;o)

Awesome possum!
I like where this is going

I love your layout.
And duuuuude!
You're such a great writer, seriously!
Can't wait for the next update.
(Matt's dimples ARE sexy.) =D